you have great mechanics but the only problem is your charisma or character.. flow is on point - beat is cool, not my style but cool nonetheless. Delivery is ok that goes along with the charisma.. You got mad talent tho. The hook is decent couple be improved a little.. other than that - I think that's all the advice I can give on this..

-Gutta

Thanks all...

Uppin' this shit once again....

nice track... Very Nice.. Emotion is dope as fuck.. Yah Flow.. Well Bomb shit.. You Remind me of Classified more then eminem.. I checked out some other tracks from you as well.. Yah got some hot shit// Keep it comming..

beats ill...nice as fuck...

lyrics are deep i can tell but lyrically it aint really somethin special and the singin on the chorus aint my style but it wasnt bad ...somethin lil different ya emotion is real good man perfect actually for what your rappin about...quality is real good nice work man i'll give you a 8.5/10

P.s. if you dont mind i'd like to use that beat for my mixtape drop a freestyle or some shit over it...hit me up on aim be nice track 1ne...