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hey nice name change...lol
this loox like the forgotten battle....we need just five well xplained damn votes yo....ughh |
Voted For: Tekneek
Yvonne like his sig..this cats verse cudnt be nothin but blank his more aimless than a misile dats y ur Tek's got no rank ^Good opener weak punch 4/10^ like a pastor castin out spirits ima wipe your hands outta text you still wudnt catch 'Fiya' if u bit from 'Lady's' brext (breast) ^Good wordplay, decent punch 6/10^ like gatherin letters you still wouldnt catch a point like its scramble NFA muh'fucker you'ld get diced if this shit was a gamble* ^Not feelin this, coulda been more creative 5/10^ i'll bake this hoe and make him realize he aint got his pants zipped like an over scratch disc your lines r just played and skipped ^Again good wordplay, strong finish 7/10^ OVERALL:Ur verse was nicely structured gave it good flow, each of ur punches just kept rollin allong making them presented well.Ur personals were ok, coulda been more creative overall 6/10^ YouKay dont know why yvonne decided to try-this-tyrant... ....... fucking hoar, i'll have any one of my DOGS, 'pee n shit on her' like she was a 'fire-hydrant'..... ...... ^Awesome opener, good wordplay strong punch 8/10^ damn, i'm fillin this shit wit more 'punches' than 'bowls-at-proms'........ ..... ya verse was butt, but if i really wanted to see ass, why battle u, i'd juss call-ya-moms........ ... ^Meh, didnt like the flow, but still good creative diss 6/10^ lil gurl come one slut, stop trynna punch me n hit-me-bitch...... .... we all know your boyfreinds known for 'Droppin GAME' like '50-DID'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^Lol, nice wordplay and good punch/closer felt it 8/10^ OVERALL:Ur verse was poorly structured...hard to get a flow but u made up for it with ur dope punches and tight personals....didnt lack much in this verse......overall 7/10^ v/YouKay rtf in any of my battles, since i kinly peeped urs...make sure u explain ur vote.....peace |
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Voted For: Yvonne
dont know why yvonne decided to try-this-tyrant... ....... fucking hoar, i'll have any one of my DOGS, 'pee n shit on her' like she was a 'fire-hydrant'..... ...... 4...forced multi..ok concept wit fire-hydrant shit..but wording wuz messed up damn, i'm fillin this shit wit more 'punches' than 'bowls-at-proms'........ ..... ya verse was butt, but if i really wanted to see ass, why battle u, i'd juss call-ya-moms........ ... 3...mama joke?...no. lil gurl come one slut, stop trynna punch me n hit-me-bitch...... .... we all know your boyfreinds known for 'Droppin GAME' like '50-DID'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 6.....decent.... like his sig..this cats verse cudnt be nothin but blank his more aimless than a misile dats y ur Tek's got no rank 4.....meh...wuz ite..nothing special like a pastor castin out spirits ima wipe your hands outta text you still wudnt catch 'Fiya' if u bit from 'Lady's' brext (breast) 4...forced wordplay..brext/breast?..doesn't match homophonically. like gatherin letters you still wouldnt catch a point like its scramble NFA muh'fucker you'ld get diced if this shit was a gamble* 6..creative concept 'n shit.good. i'll bake this hoe and make him realize he aint got his pants zipped like an over scratch disc your lines r just played and skipped 3...played... ok..ynovee got this. She had the best bar in this battle with the NFA one.And she also had more lines...so an advantage to her already for that. Tekneek.. didn't like the structure.I thought some of your multis were forced.U had some good concepts like the fire hydrant lines..but the wording wuzn't good.And u also had a mama joke?NO> Vote-Yvonne RTF BELOW IN 3 DAYS :thumbup:...OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205767 |
^^thanx
but i am not gonna rtf ima vote honestly...cos u know how shit goes down on rv..with those dick fixed children... |
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Voted For: Yvonne
like gatherin letters you still wouldnt catch a point like its scramble NFA muh'fucker you'ld get diced if this shit was a gamble* i'll bake this hoe and make him realize he aint got his pants zipped like an over scratch disc your lines r just played and skipped vs ya verse was butt, but if i really wanted to see ass, why battle u, i'd juss call-ya-moms........ ... lil gurl come one slut, stop trynna punch me n hit-me-bitch...... .... we all know your boyfreinds known for 'Droppin GAME' like '50-DID'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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