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This was feedback posted for Tekneek
 

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upppinnnn......................................... ..............yo i need some vote

Voted For: Tekneek

c.ghost=owned by tekneek

I VOTE for tekneek simply for his hard hitting punches his good wordplay and his good multis......dont see rappers able to keep it goin the whole verse

I didnt vote for c.ghost cuz of his simple rhyme scheme and lack of disesss...

v/tekneek

Voted For: Tekneek

Im too hot when i spit the sun get tanned
When i rhyme tek stop so u ka say the gun is jammed
^^^No
When i spit the heat ull come afta ya
I drop bombs on niggaz from england like the london massacre
^^^Weak
I aint talkin bout deadly, rest in peace to them
To defeat me, crew votes thas wat u need to win
^^^No TYpe of punch at all
"Jump" thas wat niggaz do every time i stomp
U need dells,apples and intels just to bring me comp
^^^Ight
In Im too hot and to me Tek is Frost
This battle like C-lo Cuz his record will show 12-3,he lost(1 2 3rd)
^^^No THis was Wack
We ka get it on like great said , Marvin
An L u eat 1 cuz C.ghost dint want u starvin
^^^No
Cheaa im sill in high skool man
Wit the 5th ill have loud sounds in ya ear like a high skool band
^^^Ight NOt Bad
rom the beginin I painted ya picture,Ur made
Take ya money, Throw u n da ocean so u ka swin wit da murmaids
^^^WAck
Ima real nigga U ka say I hold my owns
This Tekneek cant be new or fresh cuz he just got own'd
^^^weak Closer


this kinda person blows and he must be cussin though, like a "shy dater" afraid ta "bust personals".........
^^^Ight Opener
ya can't flip on the Z cuz i'm quick wit tha keys, i must be ridin a sail boat the way i "Sail on the C".........
^^^Good
i'm defined tough like a rhino, you "start beef" lackin pork or pig man(pigment) like albinos...........
^^^Ight
i bend syllables then i fill the spit, i can't "feel ya shit" if my hand's up your ass like a ventriloquist!!! (sick imagery... disgusting) ..............
^^^Good punch
this dawg is shook, can't beat my text if ya rocked the books, like an escaped fish my shit's "off the hook"...........
^^^Solid line
like portraits under water, i study a deeper-art, this shit aint gotta be alcatraz 4 me to sink-ya-bars........
^^^Good Closer
V/Tekneek....this was a one sided battle ghost u came weak some ur punchs were jus to basic nuthin really different....work on that...tek u came wit an ight verse it wasnt' the best but u get this win.....RTF IN SIG>>>>

will do thx...
bump

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This was feedback posted for c.ghost
 

I don't even need to explain it.CGhost..improve on everything.So much self glorifing and shit.Go read tutorials.

Voted For: Tekneek

yea, this battle is good...you both came decent.
youkay-
your opener is funny and cretively written, some strong punches in there too, some good lines, The "pigment" line wordplay was good.. and "c" bar, ok punch. lol @the ventriloquist line,was funny. ok punches towards the end, you had some creative lines here.
c.ghost-
i wasnt crazy about your structure in this verse,it seemed rushed,jumbled. you had some ok lines,but i feel your opponent came stronger witht he wordplay and multies, also you seemed to lack any real punches that would be conclusive. overall decent battle both,but i have to give it to youkay for the more creative verse.1.rtf.