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This was feedback posted for *.Fame.*
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Voted For: Krooked
fame not gettin cheese n respect n you being a vet?,HA! that's funny & you cutting the green in half cuz you neva fully get the money* ^nah man, weak opener and weak punch 0/10^ merkin without a sound or mourning..he's bound to be torn in n wreck-stale?(rexdale)..yea,cuz the town's broken down n boring** ^Iight personal didnt hit hard....4/10^ i don't bother with the rednecks..shit,i be hunting in the coast after this,my record'd be 1-0(10),kinda like the # of your posts*** ^good personal mediocore hit 5/10^ like bakery's running well..I'ma give you the right pounding profoundin u the only one I know who had an in-throw(intro) that was grounded ^nah, weak punch didnt land hard 3/10^ i must of massacred the fuck outta leprecauns way u skimping outta luck makin a thread in bitchslapped for newbs cuz simply .................................................. .................................YOU SUCK! ^played line, gutta be more creative wit it 0/10^ OVERALL:ur verse lacked good personals and punches that landed hard ur structure was not good, and did not alllow me to develop a good flow. ur vocab was rather basic and did not improve ur verse....keep elevatin. Krooked my flow is like intercourse damn its so sexual, i got 1 style and 1 flow so call me a homo-text-ual, ^something new...self glor no punch 3/10^ the way you act its a quick way to get stuck like a sticker, when you rap, you get "booze" and i aint talking bout "liquor", ^good wordplay and nice punch 7/10^ spit my "bars" krooked, just to fuck wit his "grind", its like im the opposite of the bible,cuz i kurupted his mind, ^more self glor. but also a punch 5/10^ dont chew nigga, you get rabbies for biting my drops, fuck a mic, i spit into a flashlight, to enlighten your thoughts, ^more good wordplay...nice punch 6/10^ i see a hesitation in ya verse common breathe cuzzin, cuz like a blind bitch givin head u wont see whats cummin, ^lol nice punch man hit hard 7/10^ Fuck a bitch, the tek 9 is my "main squeeze", your shawty got "ice in her mouth" giving me "brain freeze"... ^\iight word play nice closer 4/10^ OVERALL:ur verse was well structured and had a good flow, ur punches and personals were well hit and you added excellent wordplay ur vocab was average and enhanced ur verse a lot...Multis were absent but u still took the battle. good job :thumbup: V/KROOKED RTF on my battles, ill leave the links later...rtf in 3 days or this vote will be disqualified |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206909 ^rtf on either of these within 3 days or this vote getst dq'd :thumbup: |
Voted For: Krooked
ayo my flow is like intercourse damn its so sexual, i got 1 style and 1 flow so call me a homo-text-ual, 9---i like dis line... the way you act its a quick way to get stuck like a sticker, when you rap, you get "booze" and i aint talking bout "liquor", 8-----nice punch spit my "bars" krooked, just to fuck wit his "grind", its like im the opposite of the bible,cuz i kurupted his mind, 8----ok line dont chew nigga, you get rabbies for biting my drops, fuck a mic, i spit into a flashlight, to enlighten your thoughts, 5----not a very good punch i see a hesitation in ya verse common breathe cuzzin, cuz like a blind bitch givin head u wont see whats cummin, 9----good line Fuck a bitch, the tek 9 is my "main squeeze", your shawty got "ice in her mouth" giving me "brain freeze"... 9-----nice closer... not gettin cheese n respect n you being a vet?,HA! that's funny & you cutting the green in half cuz you neva fully get the money* 4----no point....bad opener merkin without a sound or mourning..he's bound to be torn in n wreck-stale?(rexdale)..yea,cuz the town's broken down n boring** 3----horrible............no point to it i don't bother with the rednecks..shit,i be hunting in the coast after this,my record'd be 1-0(10),kinda like the # of your posts*** 7----ok...line.... like bakery's running well..I'ma give you the right pounding profoundin u the only one I know who had an in-throw(intro) that was grounded 5-----not that good...didnt liek that verse i must of massacred the fuck outta leprecauns way u skimping outta luck makin a thread in bitchslapped for newbs cuz simply .................................................. .................................YOU SUCK! 3-----very bad line......no punches imma give this vote to krroked for he had more punches n had more flow.......vote for my battle......honest votes |
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Voted For: *.Fame.*
ok, decent battle both of ya. Fame- punches were strong, you had some good personals that hit, creative opener,the "cut green in half" bar was solid, also liked the wordplay on "wreck-stale"(rexdale), shit was creative, that whole bar..nice lines to go with to go with ya links, backed shit up too, closer was well written..overall: strong, hard hitting verse. krooked- ok opener, seemed like you got caught up in flow, i didnt really see any personals or wordplay here that popped out, liked the "enlighten your thoughts bar" but still wasn't powerful enough against your opponents multies, ya best lines were the closing ones, funny. Not bad, i just dont think you came as hard as your opponent on this one. I got to give this to fame.Good Luck ya'll. |
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Voted For: Krooked
Krooked ------ ayo my flow is like intercourse damn its so sexual, i got 1 style and 1 flow so call me a homo-text-ual, the way you act its a quick way to get stuck like a sticker, when you rap, you get "booze" and i aint talking bout "liquor", spit my "bars" krooked, just to fuck wit his "grind", its like im the opposite of the bible,cuz i kurupted his mind, dont chew nigga, you get rabbies for biting my drops, fuck a mic, i spit into a flashlight, to enlighten your thoughts, i see a hesitation in ya verse common breathe cuzzin, cuz like a blind bitch givin head u wont see whats cummin, Fuck a bitch, the tek 9 is my "main squeeze", your shawty got "ice in her mouth" giving me "brain freeze"... -------------- shyt was nice dude...and i seen some multis in there...a very goot verse bro..props on the punchlines as well -------------- fame ----- not gettin cheese n respect n you being a vet?,HA! that's funny & you cutting the green in half cuz you neva fully get the money* merkin without a sound or mourning..he's bound to be torn in n wreck-stale?(rexdale)..yea,cuz the town's broken down n boring** i don't bother with the rednecks..shit,i be hunting in the coast after this,my record'd be 1-0(10),kinda like the # of your posts*** like bakery's running well..I'ma give you the right pounding profoundin u the only one I know who had an in-throw(intro) that was grounded i must of massacred the fuck outta leprecauns way u skimping outta luck makin a thread in bitchslapped for newbs cuz simply .................................................. .................................YOU SUCK! ----------------- you had some personals...some punchlines...but multis...not much...your verse wasnt as hard as the other cats....but still a nice job... v/Krooked |
yo......and can i get a RTF....its in my sig yo....pCe
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Voted For: *.Fame.*
punches-fame personals-krooked multis-none structure-fame wordplay-none v/fame |
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