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B To The D 08-26-05 04:16 AM

uhhhhhh.....uppuidy............................... ........

DQ 08-26-05 04:30 AM

Voted For: -UNF-

Batman

yo im the ups man deliverin ass whoppins to u direct
of course all my puches connect
^uhm decent first line, second line is bleh

u think ur great cuz ur 17-1
but when were done ill ask whos ur daddy son?
^good second line, first line was ugh built-up

unf stands for united noticable faggets
bitch u aint nuthin but a fuckin magget
^funny closer


-UNF-

I Chain this bitch to the poles & divide-his-soul until his body emplodes/
Although I rather load shit until they explode, and cope wit the death I be-stow/
^aight opener, no real punch but good flow and shit
.
Rippin yo spleen clean from my computer screen, only 2 show ima keen shooter so watch my bullets kling/
I break bats when da hollow's fling and follow up on odor's(He stink's) like taco(pussy) creme
^lmao @ that second line haha...killed him with that one...

I'll tear yo chest off and bless-yo-best-loss against a Pro that doesn't possess flaw's/
Digest-Jaw's & cuttin off this bitch breast-OFF to end his stress wit da tech cause../
^nice closer, flow is the bomb in ya lines, good punch as wel


Vote goes to -UNF-, it was pretty one-sided because he had way more complexity to his verse than Batman.

Critic 08-26-05 08:33 AM

Voted For: -UNF-

Well I thought that batman come alright but his verse
was well basic I thought you have a nice concept that
flowed pretty well just uping vocab, harder hitting punches
and more complex rhyming...

UNF Come dope I felt u pretty much won this battle with
the first bar,.... Everything was dope maybe uping for a
few more personals but it was dope.

Vote ~ UNF


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