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La Cosa Nostra 08-25-05 03:58 PM

Alias = no idea..

Heres part of my new track so judge me on this or w/e..

Ay look,
Give me the mic, take a step back.
I aint the best cat in rap,
Untill my sledge hammer snapped.
The ex-best rappers back.
I leave lethal operatives jacked with optimal performance.
Intact with strategic tactics torching a mass of fans swarming.
Around a fagget candy rapper pouring, his knowledge on the game.
Its all the same, because his tortise brain, is slow as his flow of oxygen.
Into his tortured vein, facing rigor mortis mayne.
My lyrics saw the game, came to fournicate with swords & chains.
Searching for a horde of dames, to reclaim the force of fame.
Dopium is sure to tame the game, spike you like a cactus.
Break you with the blades of a chain saw & bore your frame backless.
As I attack this, track with tactics & fracture wack kids.
They catch scratched track lists, from this rapping flag ship.
I'm sick of everybody talking like, damus aint the shit.
You cats jus wank a bit, like genocidal athiests.

BloodVenom 08-25-05 04:00 PM

9/10...good....

Adam 08-25-05 04:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nostradamus
Alias = no idea..

Heres part of my new track so judge me on this or w/e..

Ay look,
Give me the mic, take a step back.
I aint the best cat in rap,
Untill my sledge hammer snapped.
The ex-best rappers back.
I leave lethal operatives jacked with optimal performance.
Intact with strategic tactics torching a mass of fans swarming.
Around a fagget candy rapper pouring, his knowledge on the game.
Its all the same, because his tortise brain, is slow as his flow of oxygen.
Into his tortured vein, facing rigor mortis mayne.
My lyrics saw the game, came to fournicate with swords & chains.
Searching for a horde of dames, to reclaim the force of fame.
Dopium is sure to tame the game, spike you like a cactus.
Break you with the blades of a chain saw & bore your frame backless.
As I attack this, track with tactics & fracture wack kids.
They catch scratched track lists, from this rapping flag ship.
I'm sick of everybody talking like, damus aint the shit.
You cats jus wank a bit, like genocidal athiests.


9.987365/10

Pobodys nerfect..

.Barz Of Steel. 08-25-05 04:00 PM

Red Bull=8/10..........

atti? 08-25-05 04:02 PM

8/10, And Dont Rate Based On Text Battles.

I'm Topical :)

BloodVenom 08-25-05 04:02 PM

8.5/10....no one wants to rate me :(

Sean Gunner 08-25-05 04:02 PM

Don't know.

Topical please. :)

Adam 08-25-05 04:03 PM

8.5/10

Word to The Rev..

J. Luth 08-25-05 04:03 PM

9.............. :)

.Barz Of Steel. 08-25-05 04:05 PM

9 for the spulster

atti? 08-25-05 04:05 PM

Hmmmmm, 7/10 For Spul.

Sean Gunner 08-25-05 04:10 PM

8.5/10

B To The D 08-25-05 04:11 PM

9.4/10.............

J. Luth 08-25-05 04:11 PM

8/...............

BloodVenom 08-25-05 04:12 PM

9/10...based on his record


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