wooooooooooooooo baby

HIT ME!

Props to spul on looping this shit.....ah'ight here we go.....decree...ya vocals is low...but I can hear you.....ok son u gotta come more original u took a 50 cent type approach to this....which = wackness to the 10th power...flow was cool....delivery needs to be upped.....ok tizzle quality is terrible but vocals can be heard......ya delivery needs alot of work....flow was decent needs work as well...lyrically typical...overall not bad tho.....I know both yall relaitvely new to the game....so this is def an improvement for both yall...jus keep elevating an dropping.....1

litizzle.. i got my cd now.. i jst need that cover u promised me :(

This is my favorite beat right now, and I'm mad that no one asked me to do this collaboration on it, but thats coo, lol

verse 1 - Really good storyline, and how you delivered it was good also. But your flow was a little off at the end of a few bars, which through me off a little. Overall, really good.

last verse - Running water, in the background. So the quality is your main problem. The effect on your voice made it seem that your were in the bathroom somewhere. Your flow and storyline was on point, but quality is diffinity your henderance on this track.

Overall - 7.8/10

good track.

weerd, props to trip and deuce for the feed....appreciate it
and deuce, aint know you wanted to be on yo :huh:

but weerd thanx
and chris ill still hit that cover up yo

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ill return favor if you leave links :cool:

man :shoot:

jus leave some feed please...

this was some pretty good shit...boht of u flowed pretty good...seem like ya'll tried to have that lil swagger goin...lol...good shit though...delievery was pretty good...lyrics were aight...i personally use multi's so yea...lol...rtf on my remix of "Tell Me"

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