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Voted For: Carlos

ayo.....dis kids a clown man
Ill Have "Lyrical Shells" In Your Stomach, That Will Leave You ~Shakin~
Sitting In Your Intestines, As If They Were Some Brownies ~Bakin~

Weak concept, weak punch

Youre Lame mayne, if you ever had it, you forgot youre game,
I blame ure mama cos this guys an idiot.....HE DONT EVEN HAVE A NAME,*

Concept and personal where there, but the wording wasn't, aight punch

I seen "pussies" but this for this "cat" to beat me, he needs to concentrate,
Cos at the least this nigga "N"eed "A" "Mufuckin" year to "Elevate

Not bad, good creativity but didn't hit all that hard


New nigga in rv, ur shit is wack as fuck, that make no sense G,
but that’s natural cause how many times I hear Carlos is crazy,

Personal was there, but the wording wasn't good

U can pray me mercy when I knock u like cocco nuts in survivors,
niggas say God help them, but I saw 666 number in ur pocket bible,

Weak concept, weak punch

I jew u like u grind bull shit in ur verses ,I put u in mockamaster,
only gd thing with u is that coffee is gd cause ur product of Puerto rico…

Nah, didn't like this really

Both weak verses, you both have potential, you just need to practise I guess. But Carlos got this cos he was more creative and hit harder.

v/ Carlos

Both drop a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973

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This was feedback posted for THE NAME
 

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Voted For: Carlos

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Voted For: Carlos

New nigga in rv, ur shit is wack as fuck, that make no sense G,
but that’s natural cause how many times I hear Carlos is crazy,
^whack
U can pray me mercy when I knock u like cocco nuts in survivors,
niggas say God help them, but I saw 666 number in ur pocket bible
^whack,
I jew u like u grind bull shit in ur verses ,I put u in mockamaster,
only gd thing with u is that coffee is gd cause ur product of Puerto rico
^wtf?

Ill Have "Lyrical Shells" In Your Stomach, That Will Leave You ~Shakin~
Sitting In Your Intestines, As If They Were Some Brownies ~Bakin~
^decent
Youre Lame mayne, if you ever had it, you forgot youre game,
I blame ure mama cos this guys an idiot.....HE DONT EVEN HAVE A NAME,*
^ok..
I seen "pussies" but this for this "cat" to beat me, he needs to concentrate,
Cos at the least this nigga "N"eed "A" "Mufuckin" year to "Elevate
^no

Vote-Carlos for actually having something decent.