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Voted For: ThatNigga
That: You had all personals which I like, you just stated your punches but they hit pretty hard. First 3 bars where nice, last bar was just filler so it was pretty weak. Cdusit: Your rhyming seemed forced especially in the first couple of bars, had some alright wordplay but nothing special, concepts were ok and so was flow. Nothing that stood out though really. So I got That taking it cos he had some decent personals which stood out, where as I didn't like much of Cdusit's verse. Could you both drop a vote on my battle please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973 |
Voted For: ThatNigga
echos come apparant thru your mind when I spit You went over the time limit I guess your rhymes aint legit ^^boo, boring Its was destiny you replyd to my lyricist lounge thread your spitting dead science like physist found dead ^^corny n a bit too simple Pm'd strobe cause a loss makes you feel insecure Your spit clean rubbish like trash bins are pure ^^lol corny but okish ("like" punches usually aren't that good) at least your name correct ..WACK.. yeh you "That nigga" your simply a fucking homo siloutte like a fag figure ^^simple similes, okish Im'a make this kid "bounce" from this battle like double d's ............................after I get sinister and finish ya. youll have no direction in life like toubled teens ^^nah, threat and not a funny one so booo vs. Your not winnin this battle noob, you suck im not tryna put you down Your reputation came to a halt when you tried out fa trigga town* ^^heh, ok This kid iz gettin ripped and murdered,like he in jail bein a tattle Im surprised, he got this far, didnt even know how 2 set up tha battle** ^^haha, ok, but played concept Lil advise kid ya new 2 tha site, don't battle, elevate....think about this How you expect to win a battle on a site where you dont know who tha admin is?*** ^^heh ok but kinda weak I'ma end this i got betta things 2 do, im finished im done its like murder inc beefin wit G-unit its been one...... ^^eh okish ThatNigga came more direct due to him having personals, but neither came with much wit or originality, no hate though, keep elevating, at least you're not wack like most newbs VOTE ON A BATTLE IN MY SIG NOW, THANKS |
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Voted For: ThatNigga
wow, u've really elevated since ur first battle... im so proud of u Removed |
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Voted For: Cdusit
Your not winnin this battle noob, you suck im not tryna put you down Your reputation came to a halt when you tried out fa trigga town* umm...not really 3/10 This kid iz gettin ripped and murdered,like he in jail bein a tattle Im surprised, he got this far, didnt even know how 2 set up tha battle** nope.....2/10 Lil advise kid ya new 2 tha site, don't battle, elevate....think about this How you expect to win a battle on a site where you dont know who tha admin is?*** nope again.....2/10 I'ma end this i got betta things 2 do, im finished im done its like murder inc beefin wit G-unit its been one...... best line but its ok.....4/10 no good punches....structure was decent...but nothing was good that caught my attention 11/40 = 28% echos come apparant thru your mind when I spit You went over the time limit I guess your rhymes aint legit not a hot opener but ok......4/10 Its was destiny you replyd to my lyricist lounge thread your spitting dead science like physist found dead 3/10 Pm'd strobe cause a loss makes you feel insecure Your spit clean rubbish like trash bins are pure lol...ya but not a real hard punchline....4/10 at least your name correct ..WACK.. yeh you "That nigga" your simply a fucking homo siloutte like a fag figure aiiight......4/10 Im'a make this kid "bounce" from this battle like double d's ............................after I get sinister and finish ya. youll have no direction in life like toubled teens 3/10....didnt feel it 18/50 = 36% Weak battle but vote goes to Cdusit |
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yo it was kinda hard but i would have to go wit cdusit on this cuz his punches were a little harder and he had a few little bits of wordplay mixed in.i cant vote so im jus givin feed back.no hate thatnigga,we cool
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Voted For: Cdusit
Cdusit - iight spit, your flow was good and you had good rhymes, and hard punches. Best Line - echos come apparant thru your mind when I spit You went over the time limit I guess your rhymes aint legit Worst Line - at least your name correct ..WACK.. yeh you "That nigga" your simply a fucking homo siloutte like a fag figure ThatNigga - iight spit also, you had an iight flow also, and some ok punches. Best Line - Your not winnin this battle noob, you suck im not tryna put you down Your reputation came to a halt when you tried out fa trigga town* Worst Line - I'ma end this i got betta things 2 do, im finished im done its like murder inc beefin wit G-unit its been one...... OVERALL - This was a close battle, but I think CD took this one. I liked his flow better, and his punches were hitten harder. That you need to work on flowin' better. Vote - CDusit RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210106 |
Voted For: Cdusit
vote- cdusit tn's had personals, but they bordered on fake even tho he "proved them" the tti personal was good, but the other 2 were from 3-4 months ago. every1 was a newb at 1 time, so reading all of his posts and criticizin them doesnt make very good punches for a new battle. u cud probly track ne vet's posts and find some newb mistake. so im not feelin ne of tn's punches, personal's shud be somewhat recent. cdusit, decent vers, nothin great or horrible, just ok but thats all u need 2 win in this battle |
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