| Dickard. |
09-12-05 06:09 PM |
Voted For: .Lola Cruez. II
Lola-Ur verse was quite enjoyable, Felt i was practically there.You had nice structure...helped me flow along in the piece....ur imagery and emotion was average felt you coulda been stronger in those catergories.Ur vocab was quite basic didnt feel it was enhanced at that.U had good creativity Took a different take at the topic which made it more enjoyable for me to read..I personally liked the anger and vulgernuss u put in it....overall 8/10^
Sin'cere-Ur verse was overall structured well, felt it was easier to read than ur opponents.....although some problems i did have was that ur vocab was rather basic....no words that really enhanced ur verse......Your creativity towards this verse was not so creative...kinda sensed someone would have taken this path towards the topic.....Felt ur emotion was there though...u did add emotion....though ur imagery i felt lacked a bit....wasnt feeling u made it that great.....room for improvement....overall 6/10^
V/.LOla Cruez. ll
Please rtf on my battle in my sig, since i kindly analyzed ur battle....explained honest vote....thanks......and make sure u rtf cuz my battles are slept on....thanks :thumbup:
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