Voted For: ILL-noise

yo this cat is 3-6 dam why you make me set it up..jsut retire*
battling this Daemon when he knows im gonig to put out his fire*
4...kinda weak...
dam heavyweight champ but dam that shit is worthless**
cause you were probally scared and ducked on purpose**
5...ok personal and all...wordin was messed a bit
how old r u?probally thirty chances of you getting laid,zero cuz you nerdy
only time when you knock boots is when your fucking tim's are dirty
7...kewl...
your brave i give you propz but i win your still a fool
beating me is like..putting a girl infront of clinton and him keeping his cool
4..clinton lines got played years ago
another win for ill a big L for you..case closed and murder was the anwser
i had to cut your words short like Daemon was dying of lung cancer
5...2nd line was all right...but set-up suked.

Ill-Noise says that he doesn't get Hammer time... but let's not forget...
You say you don't understand, but that's not the only thing you don't get. *
4..coulda made it hit harder
I'm not calling you stupid my friend, and I'm not trying to start some hate,
but when you talked about your maturity on RV...I think he meant his age. **
3...his age??...c'mon
Kid says he's ill-noise...so maybe he had a cold when he first grabbed a mic.
He thinks he's a joker... when this fucking faggot went to therapy to see a psyche.
3...basic and weak...
Ill-noise good? Kid takes a nap...when he says that he'll finish the rest...
Man, wash your fucking hair...it's so oilly, that bush'll go invade it next!
6....good

Well...decent battle.But I think ILL got it.

Daemon..I thought you were too basic.HAd some attempts at personals..but..they were executed bad.Some more wordplay and shit would help.That line about maturity and age?C"mon.Saying someone is 6-7 yrs old doesn't hit hard as a punch.

Vote-ILL
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207213

This was feedback posted for Daemon
 

Daemon took this one

Voted For: ILL-noise

Aii This is what I think

Ill

Your lines are more complex and a Little more original than Daemonz lines are ........Your punchez are on tact and your personals are on Q and True .........as far as your flow goes you need to work on yo structure but the flow was aii so that prolly why ya structure was fucked up bcuz yo flow was on most of the time they will not always meet hand and hand...
I think that you deserve this win in this battle and I think that you should also try and mix you some multies in yo verses sometimes if you ask me .....but yeah you get my vote in this battle

Daemon
You had a aii verse but tne i think that you tried to hard to hit in spots that werent that important....but then you also had some nice personals but your wording kinda threw it off when you try to deep dive into the wordingz its like your forcing yourself and it threw your style off which threw your verse off and which contributed to you losing this battle.

I dont think that you deserve this win

So my vote goes to Ill-Noise

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Voted For: ILL-noise

how old r u?probally thirty chances of you getting laid,zero cuz you nerdy
only time when you knock boots is when your fucking tim's are dirty

that was the only good line of the entire battle...little wordplay from each....non existant punches ....blah this battle sucked ass....but ill-noise had one good line therefore he gets this battle...daemon ya didnt throw any punches i like ya topicals but ya not that great at battlin adn ill noise up ya game

v/ill-noise for a better verse

Voted For: ILL-noise

ok...noise

how old r u?probally thirty chances of you getting laid,zero cuz you nerdy
wow. what a weak ass line.

not really anything good to quote. very sub-average verse. be more creative. 1/10

ok Daemon...
you were a heavyweight champ? LMAO. seriously?
This was just a plain old pathetic display of text.
no flow, no rhyme, and made no sense. .002/10