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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
you woned that nigga ok NOW:you got owned and your suck, no offense but stick to audio becuase you had no real good hard hitting any things you suffering form writers block? any who you need to practice writing lines and start getting better no hate but damn you need to elavte again LRYC:your rap name sucks which made me think you where gonna get owned but you came out pretty good your rhyme scheme was good and it flowed real good you also had some good punches and shit like that you just nee dto work on some metaphores and similies and other than that you owned him vote=lyric RTF PLEASE http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207228 |
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This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
He's Lyrically Unbeatable, But His Record Show He's Bin Merk The Only Thing You Actually Mastered Yo....Is Laying In Dirt ^^^Ight Opener....not really hard hittin but u did mix a personal Needed Two Day's To Drop, What's A Matter, You Pre Write? Your Hottness Aint Spoted, Drop With A Light, Wouldn't Ignite ^^^Naw Weak u worded it bad .....I'd Drop You With A Few Lines, Your Status Aint Avaialble Like The System You Just Hang Around, But Not Close To Fatal ^^^Ight Line not really much of a punch.... Illiterate Minds Get Opened, All I Need Is A Blade To His Brain Another G-Unot..............Cuz Lyrical Has A Fade In His Game ^^^Nice That was a good line i liked this one.... He's Got No Life, Lyrical Has More Post Then Most Rv's Vets We All Know You Pussy Son, Sorrority's Sporting Barbie Sets ^^^IGht line...nuthin special Come On...This Coward Wouldn't Dismantle Me With Machinery Tried To Tell Lyric Is Mind Don't Work, But He's Not Hearing Me ^^^No....worded bad...... So Fuck A 14 Lines Cuz......I'm Not Really Doing Text Again You Throwing A Punch Is Rarer, Then US Electing A Mexican ^^^Nice Closer.... Everybody in formation and report to battle stations Watch NowADays get defeated, so get seated, for the presentation ^^^Good Opener Featuring the vet slayer, here to answer your prayers I bring that "fire" like Stoudamire,malice like Wallace, the Trailblazer.. ^^^Ight Line....Not really hard hittin my spits is just lean-fool........rip ya spleen-dude and honestly dawg.....rappin wasn't in ya GENE-POOL ^^^Weak Line.....Played Its a shame, another vet slayed with an array of attacks and wordplay I got you screaming and feening for more metaphor-play ^^^Ight Line Wit the Vet play-off fix your priorities dawg, sick flow? you're sellin a fine dream develop a scheme on me? fag just develop a rhyme scheme ^^^Nice Punch.... 15-8 is impressive, but there has to be something I Missed You wanna impress me, name someone decent on your win list.. ^^^Solid PErsonal.....nuthin to special I mean, really, your blows hit, there must be a small print catch Cuz Only way your punches hit are if we flip this to a mirror match. ^^^Good Closer this was Nice V/Lyricalmastamind......this was an even battle to me it was hard Witch One got my vote....but Lyrical came wit a solid verse..it was consistent wit punchs that werent to special but he had personals an some wordplay but he was consistent.....Cincanatus....u had an ight verse u worded alot of ur punchs bad didnt make sense...but u had some punchs that i liked..but u werent consistent wit them some were played......No Hate....good battle to both but V/LM...1 |
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This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
Well looks like cha Boi L. Mastamind is back in da Game....Keep stackin dem wins niggas You took dis e.z.
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Voted For: Now A Days
This nigga is DOPE fo SHo, HOLLA BACK.... UREPPING WELL DWAG Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
He's Lyrically Unbeatable, But His Record Show He's Bin Merk The Only Thing You Actually Mastered Yo....Is Laying In Dirt ^^too simple Needed Two Day's To Drop, What's A Matter, You Pre Write? Your Hottness Aint Spoted, Drop With A Light, Wouldn't Ignite ^^lol how can it be pre-write if he writes it within the deadline? Besides, no DOPE verses are written on the spot - that's freestyling and that's different. But yeah punch is okish .....I'd Drop You With A Few Lines, Your Status Aint Avaialble Like The System You Just Hang Around, But Not Close To Fatal ^^weak Illiterate Minds Get Opened, All I Need Is A Blade To His Brain Another G-Unot..............Cuz Lyrical Has A Fade In His Game ^^ok He's Got No Life, Lyrical Has More Post Then Most Rv's Vets We All Know You Pussy Son, Sorrority's Sporting Barbie Sets ^^kinda gay but ok Come On...This Coward Wouldn't Dismantle Me With Machinery Tried To Tell Lyric Is Mind Don't Work, But He's Not Hearing Me ^^ok So Fuck A 14 Lines Cuz......I'm Not Really Doing Text Again You Throwing A Punch Is Rarer, Then US Electing A Mexican ^^heh, ok vs. Everybody in formation and report to battle stations Watch NowADays get defeated, so get seated, for the presentation ^^eh? Man sounds like you're writing a topical here. No diss Featuring the vet slayer, here to answer your prayers I bring that "fire" like Stoudamire,malice like Wallace, the Trailblazer.. ^^man, no diss again? What ya up to dawg? my spits is just lean-fool........rip ya spleen-dude and honestly dawg.....rappin wasn't in ya GENE-POOL ^^finally a diss, too simple though Its a shame, another vet slayed with an array of attacks and wordplay I got you screaming and feening for more metaphor-play ^^nah, havent seen wordplay yet fix your priorities dawg, sick flow? you're sellin a fine dream develop a scheme on me? fag just develop a rhyme scheme ^^ok this one is kinda personal 15-8 is impressive, but there has to be something I Missed You wanna impress me, name someone decent on your win list.. ^^ok I mean, really, your blows hit, there must be a small print catch Cuz Only way your punches hit are if we flip this to a mirror match.. ^^better Was about to give this to Cincanatus, cos Lyrical started wack wasting space, but he got some punches in at the end and C's punches were generally weak. Also Lyrical had the better rhyme scheme so he just gets this But lyrical, why ya copying your sig from $pitacular on RB? Think of ya own sig man. Anyway, Cin, can ya hit up the battle in my sig honestly? Thanks |
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
this goes to LyricalMa$tamind because cin came wit some weak ass punches thats what brought him down otherwise he would one but anyway,,,,,, v/LyricalMa$tamind Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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