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Daubs 09-08-05 04:58 PM

Voted For: Bone Collector

Obviousely,

for having punchlines flow and all the rest, not feelin struct.


ThEBlAhBlAh you need to elevate in...rap basically.

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ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-08-05 10:54 PM

ayo uppin 4 dis shyt man dese pplz votes makes no sense aniwaiis uppin!!!

JRoy 09-08-05 11:34 PM

Voted For: Bone Collector

alright simple and plain.....bone had better punches and better similies but bone you gotta work on ya structure...but ya word play and what not was tight.... Notorious work on ya flow and ya metas also work on ya vocabualy and you'll be set..alright my vote is bone

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InfiniteStan 09-08-05 11:52 PM

Voted For: Bone Collector

v/bone collector...both verses need better structure
and need to hit harder with punches...bonecollector got it because he had better punches .but still needs to elevate ..

notorious d... you need to fix your structure..you really havent been elevatin since i battled you.. u need to stop writtin the same word at the end of each punch..and most of it wasnt even a punch.. so wat does that tell you?..u need to elevate.. just get that structure fixed and elevate on your vocab and youll be ok...but no hate .. if you read my shit and there needs to be corrections on mine. then go head and say aiight.. but just elevate cuz u really havent since i battled you!!!

AITZ 09-09-05 05:38 AM

Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

bone
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Dude Comeon Be Serious The Reasin You
.................................2-0 Is Cuz U Battle Nice Guys
Thats Easy Like Goin To Beverly Hills And Doin
.................................................. .............drive Bies
Im A End U Like General In Street Fighters
Cuz Youd Be 0-2 If It Wasnt For Dickriders
I Guess The Only Times He Spits First
..........................is When Hes Playing Truth Or Dare
Cuz When He Facs Me He Dosent Even Stare
You Little Pussy Was Scared To Accept
Ur Wack Like When Scobey Goes For Afg Attemp
Im Ending You Like N.o Homesthat Happens When You Face The Bone
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dude you come hard..and your punchlines was onpoint. it wasnt a bad verse...but just not hard enough bro..
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ThA NoToRiOuS D
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Yo catch me in the street, poppin that bullshit
Catch a fat lip, hoes all over your shit

My house of reresentatives stay starvin, beats thumpin
You get wyt bytches but ur not the 1 dumping

Im unholy, cause there ain't a part missin
and i catch u in da club on the floor with a heart missin

my point is that u a bitch aint no one gone respect ya
nigga not even the real bonecollector would accept ya

this your first battle and your rhymes are tiring
your pathetic.......go get a job.....i think dunkin donuts is hiring
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another good verse bro...you come harder though.
your punchlines was good..and personals had this 1 hard...nice job on this battle the both of you..
v/ThA nOtOrIoUs D

uppin on a RTF homies....werd its in my sig

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ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-10-05 10:55 AM

wow wtf y deii disqualifying evry vote!! o well uppin 4 dis bytch!!!!!!!!

Bone Collector 09-10-05 02:18 PM

Upping For Explained Votes Plz

Deranged 09-10-05 02:45 PM

This was feedback posted for Bone Collector
 
checkin polls

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-11-05 03:33 PM

uppin 4 dis bytch!! explained votes man no hate votes les go!! ill rtf

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-11-05 07:02 PM

uppin c'mon pplz we need votes.............

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-12-05 12:09 AM

uppin 4 dis bytch man......

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-14-05 09:41 PM

upppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnn

Chris Stylez 09-16-05 12:14 AM

This was feedback posted for Bone Collector
 
Basicly i thone bone got em Tha NotoriousD i see you poppin ish on alotta thread and nigga u berly aint even decent on text nigga....Mane Up ya record some so i can battle you and make a win aginst you looke worth something......Bone you got this easy i just dont feel like explainnin

Chris Stylez 09-16-05 12:21 AM

both Emcees DO what im doing but on a Major Scale....yeah just look right above my avatar Elevate....

Bone Collector 09-16-05 09:17 PM

Got Damn Still 1-0 Vote Up


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