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This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
I'm checkin those ol' polls on this battle:thumbup:
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^^thanks alot for the votes and feed, uppin for more votes please
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yo death how u gonna call me tha wackest wen ur tha one gittin beat 0-3 to me in our battle?...and thatz 0(death) 3(BATMAN BITCH)...u talk too much shit and then cant back it up wit skill...no wonder u cant bak it up wit skill...u aint got none...my bad i dont mean to be like that u started bombin on me first so i fired bak...no hate tho...cuz im not that great either so dont feel bad...jus elevate and you'll be madd nice...you'll go from shit,to THA shit...once again though...no hate between us mayne...word
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yea CHACHIN LASERS
BLAZIN FAKERS called multi syllabul rhyme... this shits retarded... i spat that in like two seconds cause his is straight garbage... anyway go peep my other battle |
Voted For: Mystic Chaos
Its obvious to see your whack beyond belief This nigga was dead before his rhymes was effected by me Newb's like you dont gotta secure spot on rapverse This bitch could spit his best but he would still rap worse ill expose you to your "death", youll be leaving this in a herse Whose whacker u or batman.....silence a big controverse* Your fighting for a spot to be the whackest on this site Well your the worst you herb saying that w/out fealing contrite Battelin this cat is like the hurricaine verse people, its slaughter This nigga got his death in the hurricaine drowning in 3 feet deep water ---------------------------------------------------- nice punchlines...and i felt this drop alot harder then the other cat ------------------------------------------ he was asking where ive spat n shit.. nowhere.. but i used to COME at the SITE of ya mums tits ill disemble your GARNENT OF RAPS, cause ill blow your TOP OFF Masterbatin BURNS HIS WRIST, thats how this nerd CLOCKS HOT ill set this DUMMY alight cause im blazin FAKERS These CLIPS BURN up his FACE, like DVD CACHIN LASERS EXCESSIVE MASTERBATION, makes his BARS SEE RAWS so his mommy bought a sperm protector for his keyboad! Like BABIES with matches, ill burn your BLOCK and CRIB because ill finish my MAGICAL ACT... and STOP this TRICK -------------------------------------- work on ur vocab dude...and you need to work on ur punchlines..most of these lines was played...just didnt cut it v/mystic chaos |
o...can i get an rtf on 1 of my battles as well.....werd.......they in my sig
uppin 4 an rtf and uppin 4 some votes |
Voted For: Mystic Chaos
aight you won but you need to work harder on your similies and your punches death.. you got murder you need to work harder and elevate that might have seemed liek it was good but then again it wasnt , im not haten im just telling the truth and if you wanna ghet better just stay on this site and you will elevate just read alot more books and battles and you will get alot better mystic...yo you beat him and you had good consepts but they where all worded wrong and none of your bars hit hard you need to work on similies and metaphores and perosnas, most of your bars wher wack but they had good consepts, if you would have took a few more minues on each bar then they would have hit alot harder ..just keep battling vote= choas rtf please http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207228 |
Voted For: Death
Lol, this battle was tough for me to vote on, you both came with very different styles... chaos- you had a nice flow going on in your verse, strong vocabulary,but lacked a powerful punch to your style, although you have somwhat of a poets flow and rhyme scheme, which is good, and well portrayed, seems like this would have been better audio, if you dabble into it. Personals, i dont know if i spotted any, or if they were hard hitting, seemed like you sort of floated through this battle. you definately have a creative outlook on battling though. death- Lol at the first bar, drew me into it somewhat, the second bar is decent as well, strong, some spelling mistakes but at least i know what you trying to say throughout, nice 3rd bar,kinda funny..lol@ the "sperm protector for the keyboard"bar...nice wordplay on the last bar, some funny stuff. Overall you both were good, but i have to go with death on the stronger battle type verse.No beef.1 |
now i see why i always put the post limit higher.............so herbs dont vote............any ways thanks for all the honest votes..........uppin for more, and i believe i win by tko!
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos
he was asking where ive spat n shit.. nowhere.. but i used to COME at the SITE of ya mums tits ^^^No weak opener ill disemble your GARNENT OF RAPS, cause ill blow your TOP OFF Masterbatin BURNS HIS WRIST, thats how this nerd CLOCKS HOT ^^^ight....worded wrong ill set this DUMMY alight cause im blazin FAKERS These CLIPS BURN up his FACE, like DVD CACHIN LASERS ^^^Nuthin Special EXCESSIVE MASTERBATION, makes his BARS SEE RAWS so his mommy bought a sperm protector for his keyboad! ^^^No Masterbatin....keyboard lines played Like BABIES with matches, ill burn your BLOCK and CRIB because ill finish my MAGICAL ACT... and STOP this TRICK ^^^Ight Closer Its obvious to see your whack beyond belief This nigga was dead before his rhymes was effected by me ^^^Ight Opener Newb's like you dont gotta secure spot on rapverse This bitch could spit his best but he would still rap worse ^^^Ight....Not REally Anythin Special ill expose you to your "death", youll be leaving this in a herse Whose whacker u or batman.....silence a big controverse* ^^^Good personal..... Your fighting for a spot to be the whackest on this site Well your the worst you herb saying that w/out fealing contrite ^^^Good vocab....but weak punch Battelin this cat is like the hurricaine verse people, its slaughter This nigga got his death in the hurricaine drowning in 3 feet deep water ^^^Good closer.... V/Mystic....this wasn't really a great battle.....both came weak....but mystic came less weak....death work on ur punchs an wordplay also structure.....V/mystic.....RTF IN SIG OR THIS WILL BE REMOVED.... |
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