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uppin to the top.....
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uppin to the top
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intro got annoying... beat not that nice... your quality is awfull, flow is decent for most part, falls off too much at times, delivery is ok... hooks just wack... chief flow sounds un-comfortable and ur very hesitant at times, delivery is un-confident, hook again is just awfull... track wasnt all that, no beef just bein real with you
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LMAO whatever man I know I killed this track....
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man, we aint got no beef, im voicing my opinion, accept it.... your flow wasnt perfect and your delivery is un-polished, i didnt see one reply that said your verse was amasing, so please, be quiet and loose the ego
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^ROFL you big headed for someone who came ass on his own track..damn cocky as hell an dont realease no more tony an sheif wackness and dont come back in here runnin yo mouth to me either set up a battle or diss me ill be lookin forward to a diss...=1= |
Fuck that wack ass dissing shit I don't need to diss mafuckers over the net cause its a waste of time so fuck you and your hatting I'll murder any nigga on a track and my flow wasn't perfect because I aint even hear the beat
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No one said my verse was amazing whats is that? |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207671
Here's another link to were peeps said I came hard and chief didn't and I came weak Decree you are the dumbest bitch on RV you unwanted piece of shit |
he said you came GOOD, thats different to amasing and in the other thread, he said u came nice for a first audio... he said ur flow slipped, so again he isnt saying its amasing....
if you can accept feedback dont post a track, i KNOW what im talking about kid, i wouldnt be performing on stages next to world wide respected artists if i didnt would i??? please man, be quiet, you arent dope, but your not wack, your just average |
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^Man stfu seriously you jus got done sayin and i quote "LMAO i killed this track i know i did....fuken humble yourself man damn let it go fa reel lmao damn never seen someone so bitchmade in my life... |
lmao @ the cam'ron intro
your vocals are WAAAY too high but yo, your verse is dope and I like ya voice, no homo. but yo, the quality brings down the entire song. SHEIF? OMFG NIGGA IS GARBAGE LMFAO I was like wtf? this white ma'fucka but Tony Green shit was more then decent, and the beat was dope as hell too, all the rings and bings and shit was dope. but yo, turn your vocals down so we can hear the beat overall, the song is fairly decent, but fix the quality shit, and take sheif out. |
OK....Tony this is real feed...but no hate in this....
im actually pleasently surprised by you....pretty decent delivery....OK flow....one thing you can still work on is lyrics....and up your quality some....get some better equipment....but overall not a bad verse at all..... chief....your flow is kinda fucked man...you need to work on that...i dunno....just seems weird to me...just elevate some.... |
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Look at yourself..... but Invektive and Kyro good lookin man thanxx for the feed |
intro is kinda anoyin, but on ure verse: you can tell that youre not hearin the beat when you rappin this and for that its good, but flow is still good, lyrics are pretty basic, hook i dont like atall the echo is echoin to much that you cant hear it, 2nd verse: youre voice dont fit gangsta so when youre talkin like you goin to kill people you gotta real hit the beat like grind it, tha q told me that take control of the beat not let it take over you, chief: quality not great but likin the flow, youre hitting the beat good, if you made this beat then well done:
Chief: 5/10 TG: 5/10 Overall 5/10 |
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