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Dabatos 09-09-05 11:47 AM

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Originally Posted by the omen
pleez... dont bother.. go do ur "show" aka standing at the middle skool w/ a trenchcoat on "show"ing all the small children what u have underneat it..... hmmmm uh oh..l;ol


Hey i rapped for my skewl rally woo hoo.. was hella tite lol.. 1000 students!! lol.. and about half of em gave me props wooo hooo.. but yeah leady just stop beefing ahh... its the net..u dont have to prove ne points..

the omen 09-09-05 12:21 PM

i wasnt talkin about rapping at a skool lol... im talkin about those sicko's who expose themselfs to kids...lol

Dabatos 09-09-05 01:55 PM

oh........... hahah my bad :( im jst filipino lol

the omen 09-11-05 01:31 PM

yall sleepy or sumn???

S e n s e R 09-11-05 01:44 PM

lol wow you've improved nice drop omen but yeah ya voice needa switch up a bit for certain tracks you cant always sound monotone feel me...and another thin try not soundin like your readin some times cuz mannn ya bars are good but you write'em wayyy too long cut down on syllables be and yo flow along wit your bars would be a real good mix na'mean...and as for this leady cat son i engineer tracks and acapellas for a livin basically and there was no punch in i peeped it twice to see if there was any fact to what you were sayin and there isnt...and thats beside the fact...lets say you peeped any of my songs and i so happened to punch in it really dont mean shit...cuz i can spit the whole song to you chorus and all without soundin like i ran outta breath so be Ez junior 1ne..

the omen 09-12-05 07:44 AM

good lookin sense

Premanition 09-12-05 05:16 PM

damn this is hottness for a freestyle man, i still can't really do this shit, startin to get beta but no way i cud go that long and still keep it dope, nice piece

lyrics are gud, not great but its a freestyle so they good, flow is fire on point from beginning to end and presense is good also...

this was a nice piece rite here

keep droppin

pz

the omen 09-12-05 05:41 PM

word good looks. btw, the producer of this beat ended up peepin me lace it, n wants to get on a more serious tip. so expect another banger sooon. cuz his beats are flame. perpetualproductions, look em up on sc...

TeamOne 09-13-05 01:07 AM

i heard u punch in....... not a very believable freestyle....... i heard that comb and casked thing on soc..... ok freestyle considerin u recycled and punch in..... if u take that out tho, it was pretty dope

.Ike. 09-13-05 01:42 AM

damn i gotta give u props for this...if it was a free...shit was dope...u said u mixed off beat a lil...so i wont talk about flow....some of the lines were pretty dope....the multies stood out the most to me...good shit....

the omen 09-13-05 10:16 AM

bah. im not gonna adress tha punch in issues again... instead of sayin "you punched in" tell me where u hear this "punch in" and i can tell u exactly y ur retarded... lol... but yea thanks alot for peepin... o n that soc line, i already said above that it was recycled... freestyles are notorious for reusing lines.. sorry thats how tha game go... but ppl really needa read the above posts b4 repeatin themselfs... appreaciate it greatly tho

Pro. 09-13-05 10:28 AM

Sound like dude from dilated ppl...wit a mix of Chino XL..a lil off beat tho'


good shit..for a free...7.5/10


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