Lmao, we were just fucking around....XD I'm too good, J.

This was feedback posted for Daemon
 

this is weird, u obviously win....but ur verse was full of nonseriousness...i envy that :cool:

Voted For: Daemon

wow.....silly battle....

daemon had overall a better verse, childish rhymes but the sheer corny-ness that they were had me laughing, that havoc dude, was that like a quick 30 second thing talking a bunch of nonsense, it flowed well but thats it, the rest totally sucked ass.....daemon's verse was forced structure at its best, lol......but i still can't get over how ure verse is still making me laugh even though it isnt really that good :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

V/ - Daemon

RTF!!! on my L.I. battle.....link is in my siggy, leave a decent vote to plz.

Voted For: Daemon

XxHavocxX

Welcome to Rapverse, here comes the meat,
Fresh off the hook and bought off the street.
3.. would have sounded decent on audio, not a punchline though..
Newbie is here, the Green one arrives,
But these kind of rhymes can change your whole lives.
0.. this has nothing to do with the battle..
So let's see what you got, Daemon, let's see what you spin,
Cycle of poetry, from beginning to end.
0.. who cares?.. you need to toss in some punches every once in a while..

Overall - 3

Daemon

John, we'll live in the same house and be together forever, my sister,
And I pop your donkey more then I pop my plastic pistol, oh yeah.
0.. complete garbage..
Flow bad, I know your dad, we talked on the phone I was like 'you bad'
And he's like, that's not true, I've got snacks, I'm teh mofuckin' nomad!
1.. at least in the first line you attempted a punch.. even though it sucked..
I'm sorry, but your poems suck, and no one wants to be like you...
I set up a punching booth man, so genius can finally strike you.
4.. not that creative, but at least its a punch, and an attempt at wit..

Overall - 5

Vote - Daemon

Lmao...we were just messing.......................