| King Solo |
09-18-05 12:16 AM |
Voted For: Status
i don't really like these battles cuz self-glorifying is wack....
but check it,
TECHNICAL - you really didnt do anything creative at all, the opening bar was merely average because the concepts used to big yourself up were played. then you had that one off line that didnt seem to fit anywhere with a bar. ure wordplay was aight in places, u had a couple of multies going on, more so at the end but overall the verse was too basic and lacked any kind of creativity, best bar was probably the hamlet one and that was still weak. OVERALL - 4/10
STATUS - nice verse, not as good as i wud've expected but you didnt try i can see. the opening bar was prolly the weakest, played concepts and it just seemed corny and childish. i liked the 'cumming' line with the black light, even though it may seem homo it was still amusing. u had a bit of aight wordplay, lacked some of ure real creativeness, and the closer though, that was funny, the concept has been used a few times but you made it funny still. OVERALL - 6/10
V/ - STATUS
plz rtf on one of my battles, links are in my siggy. :thumbup:
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