This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

yo how could you possibly win when we start colliding
your name jus proves that your tha master of dick riding*
your absurd thinkin you can beat tha 1 an onlii
so im jus gonna prove to everyone that your a phony
you make me laugh wen thinkin your tha best of all-time
wen you git on tha mic u should be arrested for a crime
my vocab is high and thats why your so amiss**
dont worry i wouldnt expect you to comprehend my diss

dis guy has better wordplay and punches..........his structure was way better n way smoother........he flowed....



hey Tha 1 An Onlii B
u kno wat i see
a person tryin to spit like me
ill set my anger free
on thee
hope u kno i spit hot fire
i inspire
newbs like u
u now who u messin wit
afta this battle ull need a medical kit
ur heart will be broken
my raps are the finest
afta this battle ull be callin me highness
ill drop u like a bomb
fast and quick
cause my flow is just that sick
so u can just suck my dick
ill drop ya like scarface dropped cops
if u beat me ill give ya props


horrible wordplay.......i give hime a 3/10 NO hate u gotta elevate dawg......u had bad multi's...
i give this 2 tha 1 an onlii b

Rtf...........da Battle Is In Ma Sig 1

Voted For: Ryda

No hate but both yall needa elevate....try usen punches,personals and multis....im wack but i do know
what is needed to elevate

That was meant for feedback^^ NOT A VOTE

This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

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lol^^^u voted 4 him.....that sucks...............

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Ryda
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hey Tha 1 An Onlii B
u kno wat i see
a person tryin to spit like me
(0/10 weak as..)
ill set my anger free
on thee
hope u kno i spit hot fire
i inspire
newbs like u
u now who u messin wit
afta this battle ull need a medical kit
ur heart will be broken
my raps are the finest
afta this battle ull be callin me highness
ill drop u like a bomb
fast and quick
cause my flow is just that sick
so u can just suck my dick
ill drop ya like scarface dropped cops
if u beat me ill give ya props
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hold on hold on...i can't get ahold of your flow at all dude..you need to elevate more then enough b4 you battle again...no hate but it needs to be done
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tha 1 an onlii b
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yo how could you possibly win when we start colliding
your name jus proves that your tha master of dick riding*
(it's an ok line.. )
your absurd thinkin you can beat tha 1 an onlii
so im jus gonna prove to everyone that your a phony
(another good 1..)
you make me laugh wen thinkin your tha best of all-time
wen you git on tha mic u should be arrested for a crime
(um..ok.."when you get on the mic you should be arrested for a crime"...really is like props to him..so nothing good in this 1.)
my vocab is high and thats why your so amiss**
dont worry i wouldnt expect you to comprehend my diss
(this line tightened it up..nice work.)

you straight done the other cat, but he was low on the keystyle anyway..nice work and no hate to "ryda" elevate son.

v/Tha 1 An Onlii B

return the favour pplz honest though...they are in my signature..

werd