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Voted For: Nu-Money

Now Dats~Hot...Or At Least Dats~What The Voters Tell Me
Catchin A CD ''Case'' Is Da Closest U'll Ever Get 2 A 'Felony'
Even Ya Own Mom Be Bellin~Me...Askin 2 Drop A New Punch
When The Only Thing She Ever Asks U Is What U Want For Lunch!!

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and im awhere that this is a freestyle
and i dont want this to get to hostile
all this reading will be worth while
its not my fault my raps are versatile*
peace hit me up when you get some style

This was feedback posted for Big_O
 

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Voted For: Nu-Money

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Voted For: Nu-Money

Nu-Money i got nothing agianst you
Accept winnie the pooh has better rhymes then you
2...no,ya concept is winnie the pooh?...No.
incase you cant construe*
all im saying is im better then you
0...self glorifing..big words mean nothing in battles,
you sitting in a canoe going up shits creek
With out a paddle sittin
on a horse without a saddle
the ride is rough and youll know soon enough
1..not rhyming...and not dissing.
...........that this rhyming game aint to hard
after every rhyme ill leave you scarred
you know when you rap you sound like a retard?
1...no,this was just dumb.
I know when i rhyme theres alot of self glory
but when i rhyme i spit my life story
1...this is NOT a punch.
and im awhere that this is a freestyle
and i dont want this to get to hostile
0....this is NOT a punch.
all this reading will be worth while
its not my fault my raps are versatile*
peace hit me up when you get some style
0...this is NOT a punch.

Ok..I see no need to break down Nu-Money's verse as this battle was so fucking one-sided.
Biig_O
In case you don't know...a battle verse is sopposed to diss the oppenent..You don't self glorifing in battles.And big words doesn't mean shit in battles...cos i saw you were define'n words like it's 'sposed to mean something.

Nu-Money...you bassically win this battle for throwing a battle verse out there.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210224

Voted For: Nu-Money

wow this was kinda obvious Rah-Ta-Tat-Tat came witt alot mo good than Big o it seems like you had a hard time think uv some shit so u kinda rushed it slow down next time, this vot goez 2 Rah-Ta-Tat-Tat