Voted For: Atticus

ok..

Well none of you rhymed so I'll exclude flow from the vote.

Atticus: The way you worded your shit was amasing
"He knows not of his victim's Relation, rather only progression."
And the metaphore with mother and mother nature. Your vocab didn't make my brain explode, but it was there. Structured well(don't care though), plus imagery painted clearly. Ill job.

Sick I am:

Basically you didn't do anything wrong. But your strong points were outmaatched by atticus. So its hard for me to vote :( You did good though, just you were outmatched.

Don't remove this vote I did my best :cussing:

vote/atticus

^^ haha very good explanation, it shall not be removed :)

Voted For: Atticus

A'ight this was a pretty good battle...

Atticus...great imagery, vocab, the works...you had a very interesting take on the topic, and I liked it a lot. Good work.

Willap...a good verse, it was great but it wasnt on the same level as Atty...it was a good battle but I feel Atticus edged out more.

No hate...both of you are dope. :thumbup:

^^ you dont even know who was battlin here do you?!?! did you even read it at all ?........... :wtf:

thats bull shit lol..........willap? try sick.i.am sucka :wtf:

Voted For: Atticus

emotion is dope in atticus drop, imagery helped me stay focused and interested. were as sick I am's got boring as fuck.

storyline is alot better from atticus.overall drop is more solid.

please explain these votes........................

Voted For: Atticus

Wow. I'm not usually the poetry sot, But This Was Good.

Both Of You Hit The Topic Very Well On This.

But Atticus's Took me away man, That was dope for real. magery and Emotion Just Excellent.

Sick, yours was dope too man, So I wouldnt take this as a vote against you, Cos your poem was real nice, and i know for a fact i couldnt write like that.

Great Poems From Both. Stay Up, and Keep Writing.

Peace.