that fuckin bull shit Ryda we goin agian now wut i know wut the fuck 6 Unlimted lines means besides wut wuz that if this wuz actually vocals u would be off beat after the second line

^but guess what, its not vocals...or audio for that matter...its text...so dont hate......on him........u dont know wut u talkin bout........anyways im really just uppin my post lol

Voted For: Ryda

I say both of you need to read other battles and get a better idea how to write text battles.


you both dropped completley wack, so im'a vote ryda for acctually having some what of a punch on his verse.

oj line,weak but won it or you.

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Voted For: Da Tru Cashmoney

vote you for actually throwing an actual verse.

Ryda..no offence..I know u new to the site 'n all...but make ur lines longer and use punchlines 'n shit.

Keep working,

Vote-Cash

Voted For: Da Tru Cashmoney

well a newby battle but blah this was a wack battle, Datrucashmoney gets this becuase of his better structure, even if its bad, better punchs...if i can say that and better imagination...but seriously you two better elevate

Ryda: you better work on your structure and flow, that was some short ass lines you had tere so i dunno, put two lines in one atleas...mmm i see that your in the next generation, i the one who created the crew and left:D lol anyway

vote: Da Tru Cashmoney

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Voted For: Da Tru Cashmoney

lol, way too much from ryda
almost decent at the beginning but really fell off at the end
cliche, but try to focus on qualitynot quantity
cashmoney's wasnt that great either, but it was hella better than a bunch of three-word lines that rhyme
lol at these lines:
"ur vocabulary
is horrible
ur structure is unexceptable"
thats exactly wut every1s gonna be sayin in there votes AGAINST u lol

vote- da tru cahmoney

rtf to at least 1 of the links in the sig :thumbup:

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