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This was feedback posted for One Man Band
looks pretty close,
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Voted For: One Man Band
damn, this battle is one-sided to me.... NK - ure shit was weak to begin with, you only had a few multi's going on and shit. in my opinion you tried to incorporate a lot of big complex vocabs along with some attempted mutli's to try and make your verse seem good. but the fact is it started real weak, you picked it up to the end with some nice multies, shit was flowin well and you had the big vocabs to so props for that, its just i think that the last few bars were the only decent portion of ure verse. 5/10 OMB - a dope verse, the rhyming was pretty much basic shit but thats cool cuz we focusin on the multies. ure shit was consistently dope with multies all the way through making your verse flow perfectly. i read through the whole thing without pause which was cool, cuz with NK's i had to stop a couple of times cuz the rhymin wasnt that good. that childish shit you did at the end actually had me laughin, i thought it was cool and amusing, aint nuthin stretched either cuz of the multies so overall a nice verse. 7/10 V/ - One Man Band |
This was feedback posted for Natural killa
i want to battle the winner of this in multies..........havent done this since the multi league existed............
even battle i dont wanna half ass vote so GL |
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Voted For: Natural killa
well this is a multi battle, so im not going to vote on punches....or personals..or vocab..or structure...or creativeness...or concepts blah blah blah overall fo real man you had the better thought out meaningfull multis...odd way to batttle but interesting to read v/natural killa rtf within 48 hours or say bye bye to this vote :thumbup: |
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