beats ok...
right off the bat i can tell your delivery/emotion needs some work
some parts of the song jus sound like your reading your lyrics off
it hurts your flow a lot

im thinking that if you up your emotion, your flows gon increase a hell of a lot with it...so work on that first.
lyrics wise its str8, i was actually feeling the hook quite a bit...
overall a decent track, just work on that emotion man...

hit me back wit some feed
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2460436

IIte dawg will hit back with feed 2morrow, yo thanks and Ill be workin on the emotion alot