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Dickard. 09-27-05 06:24 PM

uppin like shit man.....................................

Ysdat 09-27-05 06:28 PM

Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Dawg ya rhymes is lame...i expect that from you
punches neva hitten...2 ya wins are from dq's
geeky little nerd pussy sumthin ya ass dont get
Fucka Notorious d santana dip dip santanna set set*

vs

like glass, i punch you in the face and your shit shatters
get four shots on ur back..and your whole shit splatters

u should know from now that i carry the tec
similar to bin laden because im a threat


weak battle

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-27-05 08:34 PM

iight w.e fucking fag tryna take votes away..........anyways uppin.....

Dickard. 09-28-05 12:28 PM

^lmao @ you callin me a fag for taken votes away.....u just took votes away...loser
go get another d/r

uppin.................

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-28-05 05:32 PM

yea i jus did dat cuz he didnt explain shyt.......u dont want me 2 send ppl ur pms so stfu

Ryda 09-28-05 07:43 PM

This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
 
pollz.............................................

Dickard. 09-28-05 08:06 PM

uppin............................................. ...............

PreZidict 09-28-05 09:14 PM

Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Notorious D

ayo come on dawg the only reason you 5-1
cuz u make them niggas vote or they'll swallow your gun
^^ehhhhhh nah [3-10]
my punchlines are more deadly than a shot from yo gun
evrytime i battle ya'll cats..i do it fo fun
^^blah [1-10]
guzzling emcees like a bottle of OE
the only thing u defending is your friendship "homie"
^^aha u tried humor so u could get a point [1-10]
im most wanted like Tickle Me Elmo last Christmas day
today seems the perfect day to test my word play
^^blah [1-10]
like glass, i punch you in the face and your shit shatters
get four shots on ur back..and your whole shit splatters
^^......... [2-10]
u should know from now that i carry the tec
similar to bin laden because im a threat
^^best one u had lol [3-10]

ALTOGETHER = 11%


Mystic Chaos

Dawg ya rhymes is lame...i expect that from you
punches neva hitten...2 ya wins are from dq's
^^good lil personal [5-10]
geeky little nerd pussy sumthin ya ass dont get
Fucka Notorious d santana dip dip santanna set set*
^^good shit [7-10]
ya ass try's to hard ta look like that dude nah mean?
choke hold ya ass pop a gat...spray you in ya splean
^^nice usage of wordplay [6-10]
Skinny motha fuck'a i see how you tryin ta ride my dick
Ya rhyme like ya constipated nigga ya force ya shit
^^ahaha nice humor [7-10]
Elevatin ya punches....but dissin me in the cypher
P/m sayin ya dont want beef...boy i aint gettin no nicer
^^blah he weak dun matter [5-10]
Topical head at your service merkin a text head tonight
Punk ass getting hungry my shit is wut he attempts to bite
^^he should of lol [6-10]

ALTOGETHER = 36%


creativity: mystic chaos
wordplay: mystic chaos
punchlines: mystic chaos
personals: mystic chaos
humor: both
multiples: mystic chaos
flow: mystic chaos

easy win, one sided battle ELEVATE @ notorious

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-28-05 09:22 PM

uppin............................................. ........................

Dickard. 09-29-05 04:37 PM

uppin............................................. ................................

Dickard. 09-29-05 09:39 PM

upp upp.............................................up

Spektikul 09-29-05 11:10 PM

Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Notorious

ayo come on dawg the only reason you 5-1
cuz u make them niggas vote or they'll swallow your gun
Weak...
my punchlines are more deadly than a shot from yo gun
evrytime i battle ya'll cats..i do it fo fun
The fuck is that...
guzzling emcees like a bottle of OE
the only thing u defending is your friendship "homie"
Gaaaaaaaayyyyyyy...
im most wanted like Tickle Me Elmo last Christmas day
today seems the perfect day to test my word play
No punch again...
like glass, i punch you in the face and your shit shatters
get four shots on ur back..and your whole shit splatters
Dont pretend your gansta...
u should know from now that i carry the tec
similar to bin laden because im a threat
Omfg...

You failed to throw one punch or personal at your opponent. If I were to give a mark from 0-10 on your verse, it would be a -2 because you hit yourself a couple times through wackness. Elevation is essential for you to survive on Rv...

Mystic


Dawg ya rhymes is lame...i expect that from you
punches neva hitten...2 ya wins are from dq's
Ok, weak opener tho...
geeky little nerd pussy sumthin ya ass dont get
Fucka Notorious d santana dip dip santanna set set*
Meh...
ya ass try's to hard ta look like that dude nah mean?
choke hold ya ass pop a gat...spray you in ya splean
Not a great punch attempt...
Skinny motha fuck'a i see how you tryin ta ride my dick
Ya rhyme like ya constipated nigga ya force ya shit
Booooo...
Elevatin ya punches....but dissin me in the cypher
P/m sayin ya dont want beef...boy i aint gettin no nicer
Weak...
Topical head at your service merkin a text head tonight
Punk ass getting hungry my shit is wut he attempts to bite
Ok closer...

You verse wasnt far off from your opponents for wackness. You also need to do some elevating yo. But all in all you won so congrats...

V/Mystic.....................

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-29-05 11:16 PM

ok this guy is happy cause he got 33 wins so yea uppin.....

Dickard. 09-30-05 06:09 PM

uppin............................................. ...........

Dickard. 10-01-05 12:01 AM

uppin............................................. ...


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