uppin 4 dis shit........uppin...........uppin.......

This was feedback posted for ThA NoToRiOuS D
 

checkin polllzzz homiez...notorious you need to git outta tha habit of using self-glorification...youve improved alot though...keep at it both of you

wuht????when did i use self glorifcation..........anyways upppin....

Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

alrite honestly both verses were weak but notorious had a better structure and better punches..and notorious uve elevated a little better since i battled you . and you steping you game up. but keep going...

other cat u need to have a better structure and just elevate on your vocab . this includes to notorious too.. just keep your game up .. ..

vote for The notorious D....

Infinite_Stan

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This was feedback posted for ThA NoToRiOuS D
 

polls...wack......................................

This was feedback posted for flow verse
 

you both fuckin suck.............................................. ....

Voted For: flow verse

flow verse - iight spit, you had some good punches, attempts at wordplay.

Best Line - Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell
Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell”

Worst Line - Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut
This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up

ThA NoToRiOuS D - iight verse also, your flow was off, you had some ok punches.

Best Line - I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew
I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo

Worst Line - My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime
Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme

OVERALL - This wasnt that good of a battle, no real hard hitten punches. I vote for Flow because he tried some wordplay, and had some ok punches. D you need to flow better, and put more thought into your punches.

Vote - Flow Verse

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Voted For: flow verse

I vote for Flow Verse mainly because of the last line plus i like the punches better but "Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up" is just a great line

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Voted For: flow verse

flow verse-
I liked the wordplay flow was really really really basic....The punches were not really that great but ok the stucture was terrible maybe you could fix that again.... overall you did good enough to beat him.

ThA NoToRiOuS D-
Maybe i should be voting cause i didn't really understand alot of parts of it...Like the punches weren't that all too me...They sounded like threats not really nothin speical.. Wordplay was ok, your flow was like very basic too..Try makin it more real. no hate

v/flowverse

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Voted For: flow verse

you both fucking suck

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both weak no talent Notorious dont forget about our battle I'm settin up now

wow MADD disqualified votes....................upping..............pleas e i want to get this over with

uppin!!!!!!!!! cant believe this shyt is styll up........

please two more votes comon ppl........upping

Voted For: flow verse

Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell
Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell”
3...relating prison bars to rap bars is played
Kid thinks he’s the sickest rapper better than me? Na here’s the truth
By accepting this battle you got screwed over. Like fucking on a roof
4...decent
He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact
If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack”
3....weak
Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut
This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up
0....not much of a punch..

My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime
Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme
2....whack....first line self glorified.
I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew
I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo
1...not a punch...just a threat.
My punchlines type hard like throwing a horseshoe
My shit unrehearsed so you could call it impromptu
1...self glorifing
I bet..i'll make this guy 4-9 in just 1 hush
Hitting you and your town like a bum rush
2....borderline self glorifing
And flow verse whats going on through your mind?
Too late, you're falling too far behind
2..whack..wtf?

Ok...One-sided battle...for real.
Notorious...
Stop self glorifing.You have too much.Make every bar have a punch.Like the voodoo line/unrehearsed/bumrush....those lines self glorified as opposed to dissing the other guy.
Also..don't separate ur bars like that..put it all together.

Vote-FlowVerse
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