this was a very solid peice.. i liked it.. nice verses and yeah the shooting was a bit unexpected.. good work keep it up :D

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lovin this piece Atticus...cool ass shit,i was feelin it and it woulda been cool if it was a little longer but still a great piece of work...keep at it cuz you nice as fuck at this...hit me back homie

flow was good vocab could be better but overall i liked it 7/10

Long read. It wasnt an amazing, perfect piece. It was good though. You really forced your vocab and I didnt like that. It through off the flow and made it seem at some points you didnt even know what you were saying. Your rhyming was also very meh. Some things didnt rhyme at all. You didnt have many internals so that didnt help. The storyline was nice but you fell off in spots. It seemed to ramble on and I got bored in some areas of it. The imagery was a strong point. You did make stuff clear so I could understand it and that saved your piece. Overall it was a very mediocre piece in my opinion. My favorite lines were this..

"So Blind To Me Until The Time Of Need...
Now It Is I With Eyes Wide Shut And Blind Prestige."

So anyways I've seen better from you. Please hit up the link in my sig. Thanks bro

heh. yup this is an excellent drop. like always the intensity of your style blows me away. its very good. the flow was perect mostly. fell of a couple of times but didn't matter cuz your lines made up for it. it isn't that complex. a little simple but keep writing. I'll always read your drops.
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