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B.I.G. 10-15-05 07:23 PM

Precious........

XM 10-17-05 08:28 AM

This peice homie was good and since i kno more bout you then you might think
i kno you put work into this Lyric wouldn't want less lmao
it flowed decent, with imagry and emotion i was very impressed keep it up
Laureate shit as well.............ups to the vocab from both

L.I. 10-21-05 07:06 PM

upping this slept on masterpiece ;)

Illist 10-21-05 07:24 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by L.I.
Thanks man. Upping for some feedback, please dont sleep on this. Leave a link and I will hit it up.


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211987


this was very dope, while i was tryng to flow out L.I.'s verse it just rolled off my tongue, the multis were amazing in it. and the imagery was also very nice. dope concept also, the 2nd verse was up to the standards as well, dope drop.. one of the best i seen here since i been. Word.

Implicit 10-21-05 07:31 PM

the things that stood out most from both verses

L.I. - the flow and the multis. very good.

Laureate - the "world doesnt have enough fingers" line

both had good vocab, good flow and meaning.

L.I. 10-22-05 02:27 AM

word ill hit those links later this weekend. but yo nominate for OM of the month in RV awards and OM hall of fame..

Illist 10-22-05 02:45 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by L.I.
word ill hit those links later this weekend


i dont believe you fucker :(


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