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Originally Posted by Apexx

beat's okay. Not nuts about the synths, but it has a nice build-up. The beat needs a more pronounced melody.

the quality is shakey. got mad sizzle on it, but the lyrics on it were hot IMO and the flow was better than average, but but more lumpy than "great". Pretty much "really good". If the flow on the hook was on and you doubled it, it'd actually be pretty hot man. Shoulda cut that extra syl of "the" when saiyng "I bring the melody". I'd have changed it to "I bring melodies..."

Beat works well with it man. All in all it's a pretty good track that needs a little polish to be a "Great" track. 1

Thanks man...appreciate it...I will work on that shit. :thumbup:

ehhh...kinda expected more outta ya on this... hook was the best part of the track... not really feeling the lyrics too much.... not bad but it didn't really do nothing for me... beat and vocals were way too loud... tone 'em down... had to lower the volume to understand what you were saying...tracks ok... i give it like a 6/10... mostly cuz ya flow was putting me to sleep... too repetitve ...like everyone else said... spice it up.

beat pretty good my favorite beat of urs uve elevated alot with this
flow elevated pretty good not the gratest though
like everyone else loving the hook shined
alot of good lines in here much better lyrically in my opinion
props