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yeah good point, I'ma make it flow nicer next time
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Frauds sucked, all he said was he was gonna put you under the welcome mat, wich makes no sense, "key" wordplay is played the fuck out anyways.
v/Vaskez still Vaskez, your punch coulda been A LOT better. |
your punch is your goin to push him under a welcome mat? and i get the key wordplay, but how is that a punch?
v/ V he called u names with his meta, which is a punch |
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flow means nothin in this, your dumb... they just should keep out all the exra's and write normal |
yeah I know Jack, I underestimated
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anyway, 3-4, more votes please
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who's winning this butthole?
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at the moment it's the other dude :( well let's get some more votes
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real close here
props to both i was digging vas bar better, cuz frauds was kinda crowded but coulda went either way v/ vaskez |
V/Vaskez.....this was an ight one.......but Vask he came wit the harder hittin punch
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thanks, 5-4 to me
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Vaskez, your concept was really good, but you executed it pretty poorly. Either way, I honestly don't know how anyone could vote for Fraud. His bar was ass, there was no punch to it.
Vote - Vaskez |
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Word, make it look real pretty or people won't vote for you, lol. A Alias Or A Waste of Space? I Couldn't Tell; Flames? Musta Held 'em Back And Fled I'll Assure This: Destroy U With This "Key" And " Push U Under The Welcome Mat" Instead As played as "key" wordplay is, I got a feeling that this bar could've connected. Just wasn't worded right, and that results in a good ol' "wtf?". vs. Girls, screwing ugly losers should be a crime, resulting in punishments galore And I guess the government agrees cos doing fraud's punishable by law A little stretched here, first line could've been shortened without effecting the bar. I've used the "fraud" play before, but it doesn't really matter considering you actually came with a decent punch. V// Vaskez |
Vote: Vaskez
Just word your punch better next week to make it come harder. |
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