its all comin together, ive only been doin this for a month and a half

Since i am muslim as well i am feeling it "Happy Ramadan Bro" flow was ok u have the same flow like i said before try to switch it up a little make it more enjoyable for the listeners chorus stood out like every one pointed out but lyrics were indepht u got yo message accross

Thanks, happy ramadan too my bruh, you fastin dawg?