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actually.. im not accusing u of biting cause im sure u dont mystic. but i read ur battle versus Natural Killa.. and i was like wow this is good competition then i saw your verse and was kinda meh..
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos
Mystic gets this both verses were str8 but i liked mystics better because h ehad more wordplay therefore more appealing, these are the strongest lines mystic Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito Apostrophe You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace.. ……………………………………….last season.. this vote goes to mystic Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^dawg thats a shitty ass vote.....anyways...uppin for votes
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Voted For: Apostrophe
Mystic...... You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater PLAYED OUT.... Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused* N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause EHH...OK You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance SEX JOKES = PLAYED Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito PENIS JOKES = PLAYED... WHOLE VERSE = PLAYED EXCEPT FOR 1 BAR...GET MORE CREATIVE WITH IT APOS I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp…. && no one would have fun watching your words play even if.. …………………………..you were the scrabble champ… PLAYED..... I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool… Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s… NICE......... From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason.. You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace.. ……………………………………….last season.. PLAYED..... Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it.. While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat… …………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it… DOPE...NICE CLOSER.... OVERALL....COUPLE PLAYED LINES...COUPLE NICE LINES.. THIS BATTLE GOES TO APO BECAUSE HIS PUNCHES WERE MORE CREATIVE AND HIT HARDER.....MOST OF MYSTICS WERE TOO PLAYED.... |
^^ooh shit...invektive voting on a text battle..
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prob p/med or aimed for votes :cool:
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos
Mystic Chaos- Your verse was pretty funny, you had some played concepts...but you re-worded them to become doper and comical...you had good incorporated wordplay that appealed to me...your personals...was a penis line...we all know thats played...but then you had some pretty strong lines to back that up best line : Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused* N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause overall: 7/10 Apostrophe- Your verse was ok, hard to read due to the font, nonetheless you had some good punches there in ur verse....kinda some played scrabble line....backed it up with a couple good punches...had some good wordplay and personals...but lacked in the flow...hard to flow ur verse...so it didnt make the punches that appealing best line: Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it.. While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat… …………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it… overall: 6/10 v/mystic chaos |
^thanks for the votes...uppin..................................
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the best part is.. no one realizes that the scrabble line is a personal on ur sig..
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos
Mystic Chaos You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater The First Line was kinda To Expected but the second line was a lil more original Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused* N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause .......The Concpet was sick but you Spell The other word menoupause... You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance ...Aii.... Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito .LOL corny but Made me laugh at how corny it was.. Overall Man You came quit decent and you had some original lines and some nice concept so I had to give my vote to you in this battle ................nice work man keep it up ....:) Apostrophe I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp…. && no one would have fun watching your words play even if.. …………………………..you were the scrabble champ… /..........Nice....../ I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool… Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s… .........Weak Concept and a Def Played punch........ From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason.. You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace.. ……………………………………….last season.. ........Weak........... Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it.. While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat… …………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it… ..........Aii...... Overall man You couldve Used more of an Original verse I say That you Should try to make up some good and dope concept and turn them into dope punchez ...........but in this battle you failed to do so ....so i couldnt give you my vote sorry :( my v/ goes to Mystic |
The favor is returned Now stop Buggin Me LOL
Yea Thanx for Yo vote though |
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