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Tha Q. 10-18-05 09:06 PM

preciate the feed man





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ILL GEE 10-19-05 02:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Tha Q.
^^^Aiyo...don't take this as a "diss" track...cuz it wasn't...It's above bein just that...As far as my ad libs, do you have any suggestions? I was just thinking that I'd like to broaden my range with them.


thanx


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i'll holla atcha on AIM or yahoo when i get a chance ... shyt was good... but ya adlibs could use a make-over... i'll holla atcha

Tha Q. 10-19-05 02:35 PM

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Originally Posted by <)-(>
i'll holla atcha on AIM or yahoo when i get a chance ... shyt was good... but ya adlibs could use a make-over... i'll holla atcha



I actually took ur advice on it...and did my adlibs/dubs differently on my new track called "A Beautiful Gay"

LOL @ my shameless plug!

theblob 10-23-05 08:14 AM

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer up

Willa 10-23-05 01:48 PM

i liked this song actually you got ur point acrros liked it audio of the month

K.ontroverz.Y 10-23-05 09:42 PM

Alright droppin feed on this shit

Production

The quality was alright. not that good. ive heard better quality from you. i could understand everything fine. The hiss reduction was good. you should of clipped it a lil bit though. the beat is koo. i was feelin it. Nice smooth peaceful vibe to it. adlibs were good. they were on time. Good effects i was feelin it. the base was good. the production was pretty good overall.

overall i give it 7/10

Lyrics

The lyrics are good in this. alot of multi's i was feelin the multi's in this. it was just line after line. no line really standed out. they were all even. lyrics were good. i dont know the topic on this. its hard to tell. but anyways the lyrics were alright in this one. same ol' shit i've heard from you. im feelin it though.

overall i give lyrics 7/10

Flow

The flow is good on this. I see you spead it up in the first verse. a little bit. Nice shit. your flow rode the beat nicely. and you stayed consistant. I didn't see a time where you fell off Beat. You should have lines stand out though. its just line to line to line. But the flow is nice like always. the multi's tie in with the flow just nicely. Im feelin it.

overall i give your flow 7.5/10

Hook

The hook is nice. i'm feelin it. Shit could get catchy if you bump this enough times. SIPPIN MARGARITAS. the hook is original on this. don't think i've heard anything alike. so thats good. the hook is on topic and fits well with the topic and the beat choice. shits koo.....

overall i give hook 7/10

Overall this track was pretty dope. i was feelin it. the flow stuck out the most. and the chorus.

i give the track 7.2/10


Pop Lotty 10-23-05 09:44 PM

this shit is hot.

real talk...this is prolly one of the best joints i heard off this site...tho i aint hear that many.

u sounded like big on this shit too...lol maybe i've just noticed.

flow is flawless....that first verse is ill
u rode this shit nice...
nice track son.

theblob 10-24-05 03:10 PM

appreciate all the feed


but Kon...if you couldn't tell what this track was about, you should listen one more go 'round

B To The D 10-24-05 04:05 PM

Hmmm Thought I Left Feed On This Anyway


Beat:Dope Kinda Jazzy Lol
I Like This Good Emotion Put In Seem's Like you Took Your Time On This
Lyrics=Dopenessssss Weerd Your Flow DOesnt Fall Off This Is TIght Shit SO Far
Hmm...When You Get On The Hook Lmao Sippin Margarita's Dope Shit LOOOVE The Voice Hooks Catchy 2nd BVerse Nice Good Emotion Dont Like It As Much As The First One Good Emotuion I Think Your Delivery Is Dope THe Lyrics Is Dope Lol The Hook Comes Back Weeerrd God I love This Hook Lol DOOOOPPPPPE Lmao Hmm GOod Track Yo 8.7/10 Keep Up!!!!!!

Paranoid 10-24-05 04:50 PM

I've always like your voice n shit. quality is good, the beat is meh I wouldn't use it ever but you sound good wit it. your flow is very good. but for some reason I perfer listening to you on collabs cuz you always have your twist and then on your singles like this it's just plain in a way I can't explain. the lyrics were cool, but emotion and flow are the best parts about this track man. try n work wit better beats man.

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theblob 10-24-05 06:26 PM

^^part of that may be my motivation...I just don't want to be the BUM on collabs

so I come real hard


word


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theblob 10-25-05 12:44 PM

eeeeeeeeeeeeeer...uppin one last time






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