This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
 

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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
 

Dope drop as usual drama.....................

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Upping this to the very top of the page, maybe get some votes on it too...

Voted For: Drama Queen

drama queen- i really liked ur topical, it had a lot of emotion, n the concept wuz good... im likin how it fit the topic of mirrored worlds, the ending made the whole thing a lot deeper, i reread the whole thing after that n certain lines had completely different meanings after knowin wut the endin is... good vocab, maybe a bit excessive tho... overall its still great

dilligence- the writin isnt at all bad, but the topical didnt really match the topics, u say "mirrored world" at th end, but that doesnt make it a mirrored world... woulda been better if u'd made it more abstract, witout dates n stuff, n then sed that today's worl mirrors back then, or suttin like that... also would been better if the endin gave meanin to it, like dqs did... basically, if u had read it carefully (which i had) u'd already kno that it wuz civil rights era, cuz of the dates n historical references n stuff... not bad tho

v/ drama queen

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ive seen this verse every where.....................

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that was beautiful Dili...... way to hold it down playa...... checkin polls and uppin for my fam, Diligence

Upping this to the very top of the page so we can get some more votes!

Upping this once again

Come on people, vote up :)

I'll return the favor!

Argh....

I just wanna get this shit closed ASAP

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