good thing strobe edited my verse. anyways, LMFAO @ willapeer, bad structure, WHO THE FUCK CARES ABOUT STRUCTURE. And wtf @ natural killa, I didnt even use the same fucking concept, omfg, so what I worded it wrong. ha, other then that, good battle.

This was feedback posted for common
 

checkin the polls...lol at commons verse

I know Cezar im wack :(

Rofl

lets do a 6liner once this is closed or some shit

^^ LMFAOOOOOOOOO @ Cezar, Aus, you should really whore that kid.

Voted For: Theory

Common

Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
Pretty played concept..
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
Haha.. This was pretty good..
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
Nah.. Didn't connect..

Theory

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
Haha.. Pretty good..
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
Decent..
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
Not as good as your first nameplay.. still decent though..

Overall, Common had 1 good bar.. Theory had 1 good bar.. Theory also had 2 decent bars.. whereas Common's other bars weren't that good. So, basing off of that, I'm giving this vote to Theory. His verse was just more consistent and better.

Vote - Theory

woot woot............................Tied now, :thumbup:

Voted For: Theory

alright...i thought common came too plain, didn't like common's opener, thoughth theory's second line sealed it for him, that was good....tight battle, think theory edged it out though, well done to both, keep up....wordness

v/common

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v/theory, i mean, obviously, hahaha, oh shit lmlo.

Voted For: common

this was a pretty weak battle but ima have to give this one to common to me he had more harder punchlines , theory basically tried to get at his alias's and how many times he got banned but failed to make any good punchlines , there for i feel common took this one hands down.

Elevate theory learn to make more direct punchlines , and work on your structure

^^ you see only a fucking herb like wild-fire would tell a text battler to work on strucutre, stfu kid.

Upp...

and theory stop wit the hostility... all love...

Fuck a bitch

Voted For: common

Aight this was a somewhat close battle.

Theory: Your opener was good.. but you used the same wordplay for your closer and it got played quickly. THe c4 punch was ill. But that whole hot flash repeat killed you.

Common: Aight to me the only punch that came hard was the last one. The opener was eh. The following line was weak. Now even if theory had more wordplay. Most of it was played.
And common's punches hit harder instead of completly relying on the wordplay punches throughout the verse.

No hate/dr or anything like that. Good job to both. But common takes it.

pc

Voted For: common

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
^nah not feelin it too much its aight though
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
^if its true nice punch
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
^Not feelin it



Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
^Shit that was a good one.
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
^nah…No meaning
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
^lol… It was alright..

Overall- battle was tuff to decide… both evened out pretty good I re-read it and I think since it made more sense and I liked the multies and was put better togther ima go with common… I don’t even know you … But good verse. Theory you did good as well also.. I just thought he came harder with everything as I explained it

V/Common

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Voted For: Theory

Damn. Theory Took This So Bad.

Common:
Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
Pretty Poor Punch, But It's Aiight, Ok As An Opener
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
That Just Seems Like Filler To Me.
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
haha, That was pretty Funny. Nice Closer.

Theory:
Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
Lol, Dope Punch, Nice Opener
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
That Second Line Was Fuckin Nice, But the First Cuod've been worded better
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
lmao, nice personal, dope closer, good punch

Theory Pretty Easily Took This, He Had Better Punches And Personals.

Word.

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upping fuck.............................................. . :shoot: