I'm not Jack The Ripper only, kids dont understand shared acount. Lol.

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This was feedback posted for Theory
 

lol your last 2 batrs were ill........ pollzz......

woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot, woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooot

this is getting gay, fucking vote...........................

vote vote....i didnt know you where jack?...wow if i knew that i woulda had some personals on you or some more creative punches....cuz really i didnt know anything about you so i was like fuck it...i ask people if they knew who you where and they were like nah...but w/e good battle...keep upppppin

^^ Actually, i'm not Jack, it's a shared acount, he only uses it sometimes.

Voted For: Theory

-Cezar-
Who the fuck Theory?...the kid is weak...Watch me snatch the victory
My wack is at your peak...so me droppin dope vs you is unnecessary
too simple son
Fukk outta here bitch...go in T's house...act like his toilet and run shit
I'd put nades in ya mouth
be onlytime ya lips open up explosive
pretty weak, didn't hit
Shit kid,hoppin on myside of the fence...you should ducked like mexicans
Make ya jaw clinch...put a straw in...and drain out all of your organs
your just stating what your gonna do to him =/
Face it faggot...ya aint bout shit...getting no pussy just like a muslim
I know this...Cuz in school T was the type 2 attend dances with his cousin
this made me laugh, but it wasn't hard
Fuckin prick...had to hop on all of LL's dicks...just to get picked
There for im have to get rid of ya quick..10lines to prove theory aint shit
that was really just a filler

Overall: You really didn't throw any punches, nothing was aimed at him, you just stated what you would do to him, didn't even use metaphors at the least. And you had a lot of filler. Your stuff was really simple. I guess your still just elevvating. Iunno, try to find some personals on the dude son, and then work on that I guess.

Theory:
Quick to rip a bitch, & he can get it spittin' sub par
Cuz i'll eat Caesar quicker then vegans at salad bars
Ok
Fuck The Legacy, bitch, these punches'll make ya face swell
& I aint talking ya wack crew when I say you'll be reppin' The L
haha, this was dope but played son
Theory'll break ya chest, hard enough to give ya cardiac arrest
So i'll take a stab at Cezar, followed by Cassius, Brutus, and the rest
kinda played but you flipped it originally, dope fucking line!
Go back to school, try to learn some shit
And by the way, it's spelt "Caeser" YOU DUMB BITCH!
no, simple, wack
Now get ripped, respect you kid? That's degrading dude
How you expect us to like ya
...when even your closest advisors assinated you
again simple, didn't connect
Fuck this girl yo, i'll put a hole in ya head & make it cave
Plus i'll caeser win so quick Julius'll start turnin' in his grave
oh shit, dope name/word play son
Faggot prick, suck a dick, i'll whore this poor head
Cuz the only Empire Cezar commands
...is C.A.L.I in his bed
ahahaha, this was funny

Overall: You had a dope verse, it first part and ending or cool, but in the middle, the spelling the name wrong, and assinated by his advisors line were pretty wack, and you put them in a row, I found it really took away from the beggining of the verse by hurting the consistancy of it all, I still think you dropped harder and got this though. LOL @ the cali line, dope son.

Voted For: -Cezar-

v/ Cezar
he just came w/ harder punches, more creative and a better structure although at first his lines seemed stretched but they weren't
and omg theory came played as fuck played as fuck

Cezar plz go back and poll in my battle.....Solitude vs VIP
this is solitude btw

wow mak, I really didn't expect a vote for him to come from someone like you, =/

:slick:
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uppppin for votes....

upppppppppppppppppppin..........

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppin