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Look, you aint good dude, and here im the boss
So i'll take the win and let Cold-Steal... the loss
Everyone knows i'm iller son, my writtens ranked higher
Plus I can watch Steel have a meltdown just by spittin' fire
When I say I fuck ya up, it's the truth I make ya feel kid
Cuz it's just so fucking easy to metal with steel, bitch
But when it comes to basketball, I bet you be the ball hog
So i'll beat you so Brown, you can Coach with Hubie dawg!

vs

This cant be hard...Hear me when I say Imma damage this youth.
An throw this Theory out...wit an "L",cuz I just hand em tha truth

cold came too weak and played in this one... easy theory, no hate.

well, atleast he knows I got it...............-_-, good sport, i'll give you that, I hate when I post a better verse and kids are like, omfg that sucks i'm gonna win.

^Look kiddo,You won...But I aint D/R..I dropped a weak verse,Oh well,It'll be a next time.

...Uppin

This was feedback posted for Theory
 

gunna be a close one, dope drops on both parts.....

I never said you d'red, the fuck you on about?

This was feedback posted for Theory
 

Don't provoke me son, cuz i'm crazy when im pissed off
And since Memphis got the Grizzlies, you can Bear this loss
^^ funny line 9/10

Except that "Bear" lines are played to fuck, but I used that one well, meh

^I ainttalkin bout you sayin it..Im juss makin ah statement...Yaknow?..I accept my loss...

Uppin this last vote.... :thumbup:

^^ ah, I see.......................................

up up up double D cup!............................

uppin this battle....I got Knocked tha out!

Damn,Bad feeling yo!


Im merkin sumbody after this shit is over......who want it?

vvvvvvvvvooooooooooooooooooooottttttttttttttttttee eeeeeeeee

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Voted For: Theory

Theory:
Look, you aint good dude, and here im the boss
So i'll take the win and let Cold-Steal... the loss
Dope, played but flipped original with the name
Everyone knows i'm iller son, my writtens ranked higher
Plus I can watch Steel have a meltdown just by spittin' fire
I found this was self glory son, =/
When I say I fuck ya up, it's the truth I make ya feel kid
Cuz it's just so fucking easy to metal with steel, bitch
Lmfao, this was nice
Straight throwing punches at ya chin till ya develop a cleft
& everyone knows CS aint been shit! Since all their best members left
ahaha, dope fucking personal and shit
Peep member title too, colossus? Get tossed pest
You can bring your boys and take the co-loss,S
weak
Don't provoke me son, cuz i'm crazy when im pissed off
And since Memphis got the Grizzlies, you can Bear this loss
coo with the location but kinda played
But when it comes to basketball, I bet you be the ball hog
So i'll beat you so Brown, you can Coach with Hubie dawg!
decent

Overall: Verse was dope man, but you had some lines I found were played, luckily you gave them and original flip, so they came out all dope and shit, nice man.

Cold-STEEL:
this Lame been askin for a Loss,A bit strange?
His Nick Name should be Edwin...cuz theory gets tha Big Bang!
huh?
Imma make this quick mayne..Cuz,Werd!..Im not worried.
Cuzo its sorta like Botany..Tha way I got this herb burried.
herb lines are played out son
an Hurry?...Fah what,Imma hit em clean an hand em stars.
Theory tha rappin vendin machine..why?..he keeps spittin out candy bars!
played concept, but coo
This cant be hard...Hear me when I say Imma damage this youth.
An throw this Theory out...wit an "L",cuz I just hand em tha truth.*
eh, iunno, this was worded bad and not a good concept
This battle is a e-z win..I dont no why he wanna push me back.
He better off battlin a mouse,Cuz he aint nothin but a pussy KAT!
lol, this was decent

Overall: It was an ok verse, but you had some played lines son, and your opener, I didnt know wtf it meant, I liked the closer though, I don't think you had any consistancy though, so.....

vote: Theory