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Arsen 10-25-05 09:44 AM

Voted For: BiZzO

Bonecollector
Like Zeus and Hercules, this TEXT Legend a~GREEK~myth/
The truth behind this story, B ORALLY~sucks~dick//
3/10 (weak punch 2nd line ruined it)
So Bitch, the truths out, but theres still one Fact~thats~Missin'/
Tell me B, how many dick sucks it cost you to be~a~legend??//
2/10 (wasnt feelin this, u talkin bout his crew but weak setup)
I rap like a~angry~husband, I'm leavin B's BITCH~lines~battered/
Empty Shells in ya mind, cuz your THOUGHTS~DON't~Matter!//
2/10 (shoulda said somthin different in da 2nd line)
Your rhymes always get~pissed~upon, I'm ready to empty~my~bladder/
Turnin' you into~a~SCHAVO and watch your Braincells scatter!//
6/10 (best line)
I'm know to extinct BITCHES, so your Life~is~endanger/
I'll splash ya brains on~the~wall, cuz beatin' CP is a NO~BRAINER!//
6/10 (good close out)
Ya Shit Wasnt Spectacular, Didnt Blow Me Away....Ya Last Two Lines Were Da Strongest, Shoulda Started & Ended Serious But Overall You Had Ah Nice Flow
Bizzo
I'll Just Smack This Dumbass Bitch, Ill Merk The Whack Prick
You Wouldnt Be The Illest Freestyler If You Was Hurlin SIck
4/10 (felt this line, jus needed a better setup)
Obviously, You Dont Know Who Tha Fuck You Messin With G
Dont Know Why I Waste My Time, Your Statz Are Still Rookie
4/10 (same thing, tha wording shoulda been better)
A loss To You Would Be A Sin, Look At The Nervous Wreck Your In
Even If You Were At The Peak, You Couldnt Even 'Top Tha Win"
7/10 (lmao good humor)
You Even Spelt The Callout Thread Wrong, All This Kid Does Is Mope *
Fuck What You Wrote, Only On Oppiste Day People Call You Dope
6/10 (once again good humor used)
Its Been A While, I Said Elevate But Hes At The Bottom Of The Pile
I'd Say "Lol" But Its Not Funny , You Got Merked On a Quick KeyStyle
6/10 (nice close also)
Ya Verse Had Some Nice Punches, Used Alotta Wordplay, Most Of It Wasnt Too Creative But Da Concepts Werent Played, Flowed Well....Overall It Was Much Betta Than BC's
VOTE: Bizzo

BiZzO 10-25-05 09:46 AM

thankyou for RTF Arsen... good lookin brah.. and thanks for the honest vote....

BiZzO 10-25-05 11:05 PM

Bump....Bump...Bump....Bump....................... ......

BiZzO 10-26-05 06:22 AM

Bump......Bump.......Bump......................... .........

.:Mike Check:. 10-28-05 06:39 PM

This was feedback posted for BiZzO
 
Checkin Pollz On This G's.........................

BiZzO 10-30-05 04:58 AM

VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEee

Ryda 10-30-05 10:38 AM

Voted For: BiZzO

v/ bizzo u had some punches and pretty good flow overall bizzo came harder

BiZzO 11-02-05 02:21 AM

Vote Vote Voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

H.D. 02-09-06 08:29 PM

Voted For: Bone Collector

Opener: Niether (both openers were very weak)
Closer: Bone
Punches: Bone (Bizzo didn't really throw any till the 2nd half of his verse, and even then they were still weak... so was Bone's but at least he threw more)
Personals: Bizzo
Structure: Bizzo
Creativity: Bone
Complexity: None

Vote: Bone Collector

dazy 02-22-06 12:14 AM

Voted For: BiZzO

i voted for bizzo cuz his lines flowed better and had better punches

bone u had ok stuff but i seen better stuff from you

no hate
rtf,toone of my battles


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