This was feedback posted for Satans Spawn
 

:slick:
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course it aint hate man,

just a battle init....

Voted For: Daubs

1st bar- both have decent openings, punches are even
2nd bar- daubs has some good wordplay here, stanza's bar sorta makes it sound like the battle will be closed wit the "the world will never kno" part... 2nd bar goes to daubs
3rd bar- dont like stanza's closer either, doesnt hit very hard
ROFL at daubs, he predicted stanza real well here (altho the swayin at the beginnin is questionable)... stanza ended by sayin "quikie" haha
3rd bar goes 2 daubs

v/daubs

Ok Then I Guess im headed for my first lost

...............UYppin

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

rofl nice verse mate you killed him...............

Voted For: Satans Spawn

I say conceptions verse was structurally better with a better flo had strong punches that daubs lacked, actually went for more personals which gave conceptions the upper hand these bars were short so you have to get straight to the point daubs no beatin around the bush nice try tho keep practising

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lmao

keep practicing,

I own you.


Learn to vote dick head.............

rofl your gay... battle me.... or learn how to vote...

Wtf I posted on some wrong shit scrap dat excuse my crazy outburst

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

your wack. jeez and your hatin on me. call me out if you wanna lose. fuck animal.

lol,

check elevated bitch slapped in a minute.

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Uppin,..............................Qhat Ya Gonna Do With That Vote ?

Dq? or what lemme know

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This was feedback posted for Satans Spawn
 

props good battel easy win........................

who you kiddin willa,

atleast he knows it.

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