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Castro... 10-30-05 04:12 PM

This was feedback posted for Flow Intelligent
 
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noname 11-01-05 03:33 PM

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Dickard. 11-01-05 06:59 PM

Voted For: Flow Intelligent

Flow Intelligent-Your verse was structured pretty good your flow was on point and everything was present.Your verse consisted of good punches that really were noticebale and good personals..you had good attacks at your opponent that stood out and your wordplay was quite amusing...pretty good piece from you man

best lines:
You a Killa, Natural? Then come test me... I got guns that embellish
But on the real i think ya hot dog... Especially on a bun with relish
overall: 8/10

Natural Killa-Your verse was structured the same as usual but your flow was off to me...i feel you poorly set up ur verse for flow really bad flow. Your punches were pretty decent i was fealing them a bit. Personals were ok but there were a couple of lines that jus tdidnt do it for me i feel you lacked more than your opponent in all honesty man

best lines :
I'd git to hidin if i wuz a trigga like u,who's git shot up with glocks for struttin
u been merked so many "times" cuz ur style bassically "clocks" up nothing
overall: 6/10

v/flow intelligent

no hate on this vote just basing my opinion

MurDah 11-02-05 12:11 PM

yea.....i'm usin ya pic in a battle..but don't get all chipped up & shook,
cuz no-one on RV is blind.................................so why rip on ya looks?
aight...

ur name gets skipped in the books and ur legacy's in the trashbin
cos you be the first herb on rapverse to ever pull out 50 wins
made no sense? legacy in the trashbin ok but then you say he pulled out 50 wins thats a complament not a diss.... weak

even in ur best battles,you still end up gettin pissed on for trying
only thing more blurry than those pics...............................is ur rhyming
ooookay

I'd git to hidin if i wuz a trigga like u,who's git shot up with glocks for struttin
u been merked so many "times" cuz ur style bassically "clocks" up nothing
decent punch,

so much of a fraud in you,with every verse u drop you boost the scandals
& ya girl is more than a slut........she been screwed more loose doorhandles
preety good ending....

you had ups and down, but still a decent verse kid....
vs

Natural You're just a classic groupie, So watch me wreck your bones
Ill take the punches you throw at me and use 'em as stepping stones
eeh ever since eminem used it, i must of herd this like 100 times... weak...

Wishing i was'nt on your hitlist, Now learn you're far from best
Even ya punchlines suck at flirting, They're playing hard to get
good hit feeling this....

Since when were you ill? Bitch you aint the best, So step down
But Natural... You do rap with heart... When you stick ya chest out
nah man...

You a Killa, Natural? Then come test me... I got guns that embellish
But on the real i think ya hot dog... Especially on a bun with relish
ha funny...

But watch what you say to my face Nat, Or i might be cracking ya jaw
Got something to get off ya chest ? Well you can start with the bra
another line i herd befor quote: Got something to get off ya chest ? Well you can start with the bra... wow why did you use this?? was playing eminem while you did this verse?

The role of a wack emcee.. You're doing a good job at playing it son
Ya not gutta bitch, But fuck with this, And ill have you laying in one
aight noting hard hitting

well honestly i was dissapointed in flow verse, i thought you had him un-till i read a played line that was said by eminem, i thought it was aight then down the line another line from eminem WTF? im sorry but i go with originality which you lacked here and even thou N.K verse was slight under-par hes was original which gets extra cool-aid-point in my book....

vote/ N.K
to bad i cant vote in Elevated front line yet....

noname 11-10-05 09:42 PM

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noname 11-13-05 04:58 PM

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noname 11-16-05 07:29 PM

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noname 11-19-05 02:17 PM

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MurDah 11-20-05 11:35 AM

i guess its legal now a day to use other people lines thata re famous they dont concider that biting any-more??

oo-well

GKillaz05 11-22-05 12:38 PM

Voted For: Flow Intelligent

Flow Intelligent - Good spit, it flowed well. You had good wordplay and strong punches.

Best Line - But watch what you say to my face Nat, Or i might be cracking ya jaw
Got something to get off ya chest ? Well you can start with the bra

Worst Line - Since when were you ill? Bitch you aint the best, So step down
But Natural... You do rap with heart... When you stick ya chest out

Natural killa - You had a solid flow, I liked some of your punches.

Best Line - yea.....i'm usin ya pic in a battle..but don't get all chipped up & shook,
cuz no-one on RV is blind.................................so why rip on ya looks?

Worst Line - so much of a fraud in you,with every verse u drop you boost the scandals
& ya girl is more than a slut........she been screwed more loose doorhandles
(bitched about my Door Knob rhyme, and then go and change it, make it even worse)

OVERALL - This battle was good, but F.I. took it. He had way better wordplay, and his punches hit hard. He flowed better as well. NK you should have came wit some good wordplay.

Vote - F.I.


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