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thank you both for the feed. upping this for more feed.
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the intro was nice, just stacked too many vocals on top of one another, it wasn't off key, it was just flatter notes, it all worked with the key of the beat though...ya'll got skills, the hook is dope...verses are definetly nice too, better mixing on the intro would make this track even better yo you mixed things the opposite way "..been through so much in my life...one thing that I know.." that should be louder and the other part should sound more like backround vocals cuz that's what they really are...this track's dope, being family your voices blend better than they would if you weren't and that definetly works in your favor, because you two have a really nice vocal blend ya'll got a MySpace paGe? |
dang where did u find this page?
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I've heard this beat before - Ike I think. Anyways - The hook is nice, could use some touch ups n stuff, but pretty decent - I love the feel of this and the message. Whoa - I don't remember you flowin this good man. You upped your game CRAZY. Good verses, and pretty good quality - I'd work on mixing the hooks, but regardless - feeling this jam. Good looks.
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The singing is nice but seems like it goes to another beat... this beat is nice in my opinion.. i like your flow your delivery seem mad relaxed which is alright but its nice to hear some infliction in your voice every now and then... seem like the chorus would sound even better if you added another layer of you talkin over the singing.. overall the track is fairly decent, but from last i heard from you (which was a LONG time ago) you have elevated. Wish the song was longer!! RTF. :)
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wut up tho.......intro sounds a lil clutterd but it was a nice touch first and second verses was cool couple slip ups in the second verse tho hook sounds like a bunch of ad libs....i worte alot of shit in this feed but it got erased by me on accident lol overal nice drop
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Singin' was dope man i cant sing so of course it is dope ahahaha 1st: Very simple but at the sametime the flow was nice...delivery was perfect lyrics an concept was crazy...i like that shit...dubs was placed well HoOk: that shit is hot man 2nd: Better than the first verse deffinitly i like how u touched this one...like the lyrics an concepts there was more emotion on this one...man..delivery was on point as well... HOoK: Same Over-all nice track dog...like how everything came together man...mixed well only thing i see wrong was the hook where some parts of the singin seemed muffled when they coulda bin brought out a lil more.. but other than that shit was hot..my ratin 8/10 holla |
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