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L. Veracity 10-30-05 12:46 PM

shit, once you get ya flow down you gonna be a serious problem...
DON'T SLEEP NIGGAS!!

lyrics were nyce, you got a sikk voice for this rap shit and ya swagger is ridiculously hawt girl...keep this shit up...work on dat flow and you ON it

DQ 10-30-05 12:49 PM

Whoa, thank you! Appreciate your feed without a doubt

Triple_N 10-30-05 06:02 PM

Okay vocals is a too low......ya flow is kinda choppy..but gettin smoother.....ya delivery sounds forced..u out-hyping yaself....the energy is starting to fall off after first couple bars......lyrics aint bad.......you def have improved greatly.......mixing was good despite being a tad low........overall def showed alot of improvement

DQ 10-30-05 06:32 PM

Okay

Yeh thx

E.C 10-31-05 05:38 AM

ok... beaty is nicee.. quality is koool. lyrics are decent, flow is ok.. gets choppy a bit but it's nothing that can't be sorted out. delivery and emotion could use some work... you have improved alot since u started... n u got an ill voice to do this.. stay up n keep droppin tracks... o yeh the outro is funny aswell lol

DQ 11-02-05 06:48 AM

Word

Thanks for feed hehe


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