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Alright good poem. Liked the imagery so vivd and quiet, but nice description. Emotion was nice, concept alright the creativity you brought it up with is decent and kept e readng. keep writing.

damn this is a good one....one of your best in my opinion......keep dropin them hot shits!!

nicce poem ........... ending could be better you know but good job.......

read mine ok it is called "have you ever" GANGSTA KIM..........