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Listening... Production Alright the beat. the beat is alright, i don't like it that much. but it was alright. The Quality on the lyrics were all around good. i really liked the quality on this shit. it was smooth and shit. I could understand everything clearly and shit. there was no diss and the clip restortion was Sick. lately everybody's on that whisper shit. its dope though. Nice effects aswell. and the volume was nice. wasn't too loud or too low. it was perfect. i was feelin this quality like whoa. For sure the best quality i've heard from all. Nice Quality 9/10 Vocals The chorus is very Nice. i like it. it was sick. Im feelin the whispering. and the lyrics. it could get very damn catchy. i can see me having sex with a girl to this song. This was a very nice chorus indeed. and nice effects. this was the best track i've heard no doubt. The flow was very nice on the hook aswell. I don't see any flaws it was all nice Alright Now. Spul. The lyrics. were very nice man. Your flow fit the beat excellent. This is honestly the best i've heard from you. Your voice is cool. You don't got the sex appeal in your voice though. but one thing. NEVER SAY THE WORD MILDO IN A SEX OR LOVE SONG. thats not right homie. i was disguisted by that line UNTIL, i heard the line after. It was straight fire. how did it go? "Beneath the sheets rap my head up like a hindu" that line was fuckin sick LOL had me crackin up hard. Shit was nice. I could understand everything you were sayin fine. No slur. everything was pronounced good. Real nice verse dawg. My Boi Ltizzle, it's obvious to see that graphics aint the only you good at. The best thing in your verse is the flow that shit was DOPE. nice shit famz. The Lyrics are nice. I dont think that pick up line would work. but hey, you never know. But yeah your pretty good for someone just beginning audio. Your voice is koo. Im diggin it. This shit was nice homie. Your emotion was blah. dont matter though not alot of emotion needed in this track. but yeah a very nice track dawg. i can understand everything you was sayin. word at you tryin to cut out the beat so you can hear the line haha. nice shit. Decree. Umm. you didnt have the best verse. but it was alright. Your emotion was there. the quality wasnt too good. Lyrics were alright. but your vocals were a little bit too high. tizzles and spuls matched perfect then when your voice kicked in it was a little bit high. You did have good lyrics though. The Flow umm. its alright. some shit was stressed. And how you gon talk about masterbation in a sex song. Man aint you pos to be talking bout girls LOL. but yeah nice lines in there. you had the nasty verse of the collaberation. LOL but umm. yeah i think this verse was pretty nice Say word that was Triple N in the hook i didnt even notice. overall vocals: 7.9/10 Overall nice track yall. i would of wrote more but im kind of tired now. Return the favour: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213085 |
^^goodaamn @ that feed famz
really apprecaited, ill be sure to check that track out. |
no problem. yeah i do that on all tracks. thats what you call Accurate feedback. Thats what ya'll should be doin but blah lol.
nice track famz |
DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNN
HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT 10/10 CRAZY Shit feelin the chorus most |
aiight much props to Kon for that dope ass feedback. and lmao even one of my freids said shit about midlew line. lmao.. I was tryin' to wordplay in cuz, I said mush in the room, like mushroom and mildew, but yea, I feel you. lmao
and thanks young. i will RTF after Jaguars game is over. uppppppppp |
fuck jaguars NEW YORK GIANTS
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lmao i was jus talkin' to trip about the Giants, since he Giants fan. but fuck that, yo, Jags and Eagles in superbowl ~_~
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word, some more feed would be coo..
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*runs in with 'No1 MAS Fan' tee and runs out*
Ima Big Fan:D:D:D i want to metion MAS in my new song:cool: |
^lol word yo......... uppppppp
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ehh @ beat...never really liked it that much....
trips hook is nice...like his delivery on this 1st verse...delivery is nice.....lyrically...its nice.... only a couple spots where voice seemed a lil shaky....but overall...dope ass verse..good job 2nd verse....LOL @ your quality tizz....get a new mic foo....lol... im liking your flow...when your started it was nice...kinda became shaky as u progressed....thatll progress with time though....delivery was ok...cant really tell with that shitty quality lol.... 3rd..... lol.....@ your lines....ewww...lol... i felt like your flow could been a lil more polished....delivery was good...but i think you shoulda came with a diff delivery....like more mellowed out... other than that...good verse.... |
hmmmm......im tired of this beat....., first dude was aight nuthin special, quality horrible, 2nd dude got a voice for rap but sounded ametuer., and personally the third dude was garbage... quality again is horrible.. but i dunno as a song i guess it wasnt bad....
id listen to it again.... no disrespect, but i think yall can come harder than that. 6/10 |
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