yea, emotion is lacking. beat is ill.... lol nice flow. real fast......... but quality pretty good, could be upped tho. But yea, major shit here was emotion. and flow was overall nice, but kinda choppy near end. so work on that, but you improving. keep it up....... 8/10 pc. one.

thanks i rtf on your battle 1 and spul i hit up the new/old mas song lol

well first of all thye beat choice is cool. somin that didn't get at me when you started was your emotion, you were talkin more like. you need to say it like you mean cause you most sounded tired when yuo did that. but your flow and delivery wasn't to bad though thats somin that you have that works well. the lyrics aren't to bad but are kinda a little to simple.

anyway good job

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i rtf on ur nat killa diss thanx

yea, def turn your vocals up a tad
especially when you come in, its a bit low

overall pretty decent
flows a lil choppy in some parts, prolly cause you went wit a kinda faster flow....makes it a bit hard
im liking the lyrics though
why you have to bring pop rocks into this? :thumbup:
but yea pretty str8
i really only liked this beat wit juelz on it...no offense to anyone who used it for rap game, it was jus str8 juelz shit...

but word, pretty solid...up your vocals though

lol at the pop rocks comment lol
yea thnx tizzy

I haven't heard that voice in a while... haha...

Emotion needs to be amplified by like twice the quotient of... I give up but you get the point.

Lyrics just don't seem to be your style... but hey... w/e

It was good... ;) Keep up the good work Amanda!

word ma'...u def improving.........flow was betetr than usual...deliveyr was blan tho.....u need to try an find a flow that works best for you..an try to rap wit more emotion......lyrically you've really elevated...keep the UPWARD movement cuz I saw alot of progress in this track..stay up........1

thanx for the feed i rtf cool track

Listening...

Haha...you didn't fit this beat...but meh...flow was decent...vocals were pretty low...lyrics was a'ight...but wow at your emotion...gotta get that up there...try like yelling when you record haha...

But anyway...decent, keep it up.

Word.

Aha This Shit Was Nice Mama, Feelin Tha Beginnin But Towards Da End It Wasnt Dat Tight...Couldnt Hear Every Word U Said Clearly But Da Flow Was Aight Still

Holla @ Me Tho Wit Cha Sexy Ass Voice ... Yessir

haha, damn girl you got some flame, but like everybody else said jus work on delivery, get mad at tha mic...really tho.. otha than that...im feelin that shit......the only thing i didnt like was tha siphilis line, kinda old..... but that shit was clean hahaha
u shoulda thru a 2nd verse to it tho or faded the end out
8/10