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Uppin'... leave me more feed cuz u love me
Left Feed on... World Domination - Devil Eye |
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My job is to speak stats and slaughter
Then dissolved weak cats in water Ill like an infectious disease out of control Kill like treacherous MC’S with clout bold Had a wild thirst since childbirth need diapers Smile first, doo-doo in my pants and proceed as a sniper Stinking and thinking but linking suspects like Michele phifer |
wtf... leave feedback dumbfuck... not write a wack ass verse.
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Nice Drop............................GOOD SHIT MAN KEEP IT UP
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thanks man... i appreciate the feed.
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This Was Real Tight Man You Got Some Skill I Liked The Image Behind It And had Alot Of Nice Multis Lines That Stood Out To Me Was
I keep writin’ my rhymed lines in time for you to decipher… Inside I’m diein’… So I metaphor the hell out of every cypher… Poor by monetary means but I’m rich in pride… Nice & Outgoing on the outside but a bitch inside… These Were Some Deep Lines Man |
thanks alot for the feedback!
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word this was dope as what usually always comes from you the first verse was the best out of the both the second was pretty niiice too i loved all this imagry and emotion you put in this.....some lines felt a lil forced but meh who cares and even if it wasnt FULL of vocab drops odnt always need bunches of it...the flow kinda went off here and there but no biggie you def got the point across with this........keep dropin solid man 8.5/10
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Jeepers Mr. Untracable... thanks for the feed... it was swell.
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dope drop homie g dawg
lmao nah it was tight i liked the shit it was coo audio is better tho 8.9/10 |
thanks hombre
uppin' faggots stop sleepin' on me! |
DAmn... I'm getting slept on :(
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