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Uppin this shit again cmon people please vote on this shit.....

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I think this was a pretty good battle need some more votes my niggas start votin again....

Voted For: Mike Macs

I think this guy won it cuz you seemed to have some clever word play and witty punchlines. You seem to come very strong towards the end but the battle was pretty close and the other emcee did well 2 but i think you just won this.. good battle to both of you.

Voted For: Mike Macs

Mic Macs

Look at this dick ridin bitch, he thinkin he a legend
Ain't no hope for you fake bitch mc's, not even heaven
^ opener basic...meh not feeling it but diss there

This bitch ain't ready for war, but he wanna step up and battle
I'ma shake the shit outta this nigga like he a baby rattle,
^ no diss jus self-g punch meh...not feelin it

This nigga gonna get knocked off his saddle, like Christopher Reeves
Check this bitch is just vegetarian happy lovin pussy,
^ 1st line ok 2nd line made no sense at all

He don't want beef, it's on his list of food peeves
Check this niggas battle record, 1-4 he got no history,
He got mo losses than world war II, it ain't no mystery
^ 3 line bar...meh...more losses than world war 2 thing could been worded better

Overall
Not a good verse can tell you're still tryin new shit though jus keep at it and you'll elevate naturally but keep battling at it

Legend

you practice sucking dick like girls do wit lolli pops
its like a advertisment seeing mike macs on 2 notch
^ meh opener 2nd line no punch at all

mike macs half decent girls this nigga wish to attract
so mike spends time a mickie D's working on big macs
^ wordplay on his name was ok...

he sees how long in jail he can keep his butt tight
like the candy everyone wants to see what mikes likes
^ no not feeling it at all nothing stood out

so pay ya toll and try to watch da votes on da poll
cause one knock to ya face eyes fall out ya asshole
^ weak closer again not feeling it

Overall
This is a tough one to decide...and not in a good way...both verses lacked anything really good...most say 2/3's or ya verses was filler Legend had aight wordplay on mic macs...but would be better if he was called big macs lol...but i gotta vote...flow both aight basic nothing extreme structure legend equal all through disses...nothing major mic stuck to it a lil tighter personals legend had the wordplay but threw in fake ones i.e prision...

v/this sucks to vote on coz neither really did enough to win...so if i could i'd say it's a draw...but Mic Macs...jus on the fact his lines were that little bit better

RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215409

Uppin this again I know it was a weak battle though lol.....................

Voted For: Mike Macs

Mike Macs - Your verse was weak, some bars didnt rhyme. It flowed ok and your punches were iight.

Best Line - Check this niggas battle record, 1-4 he got no history,
He got mo losses than world war II, it ain't no mystery

Worst Line - This nigga gonna get knocked off his saddle, like Christopher Reeves
Check this bitch is just vegetarian happy lovin pussy,

Legend - Your verse was boring, it flowed well but your punches didnt connect.

Best Line - so pay ya toll and try to watch da votes on da poll
cause one knock to ya face eyes fall out ya asshole

Worst Line - e sees how long in jail he can keep his butt tight
like the candy everyone wants to see what mikes likes

OVERALL - This was a weak battle but Mike wins because his punches were hitten harder. His flow was iight, he had some ok punches. Legend, I didnt like your verse at all, it flowed ok but your punches where not hitten.

Vote - Mike Macs

RTF in Battle wit Trey.

I would if I had 100 posts, lol, I'm uppin this, again, one mo vote and I take the win...

Voted For: Mike Macs

you practice sucking dick like girls do wit lolli pops
its like a advertisment seeing mike macs on 2 notch
ok
mike macs half decent girls this nigga wish to attract
so mike spends time a mickie D's working on big macs
ok
he sees how long in jail he can keep his butt tight
like the candy everyone wants to see what mikes likes
no
so pay ya toll and try to watch da votes on da poll
cause one knock to ya face eyes fall out ya asshole
no



Look at this dick ridin bitch, he thinkin he a legend
Ain't no hope for you fake bitch mc's, not even heaven
ok a bit better
This bitch ain't ready for war, but he wanna step up and battle
I'ma shake the shit outta this nigga like he a baby rattle,
basic rhyme
This nigga gonna get knocked off his saddle, like Christopher Reeves
Check this bitch is just vegetarian happy lovin pussy,
He don't want beef, it's on his list of food peeves
to long
Check this niggas battle record, 1-4 he got no history,
He got mo losses than world war II, it ain't no mystery
cool

i think you hit more and i thought you had a better diss good job
man am so tierd im going to sleep

but RTF please