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King Solo 11-07-05 08:18 AM

Word, motherfuckers need to vote and shit, this is ridicculous.

noname 11-07-05 09:13 AM

yea.............uppin again.......................

Spektikul 11-07-05 01:35 PM

Voted For: Nick Fletcher

Okay...

I hate voting on long ass battles, but Ima vote anyways to help yall close this shit.

So no bitching.

Nick:

Had a few very hard punches, great concepts that made me laugh, and a wide variety of personals.

Random bars I laughed at:

We all laugh at you retard, I’m a joker so I’ll have ya clowned fast
But ya don’t need to be the butt of my jokes, your already a fucking ass

Yeh, you smelly fucking hobo..ya shit I just need to fucking bin it
..so I’d take out the trash can, if you weren’t sleeping in it.

Whole verse was pretty good. Id say 79/100...Some lines could have been worded better, and maybe you could have got the structure/line lengths a bit more closer together and organized.

Killa:

You also had a nice variety of hard personals, mixed in with good structuring. Medeocre wordplay/concepts. A few were a little played, and the whole quote thing was ok until you were up to 3 of them which was wack. Also, some shit didnt even rhyme...

Random goodness:

In this battle,your lost wit what to do,your left alone just pullin hits,
& i would say "I'ma shit on you!!........but u already seem to be full of it

Stop biting,cuz ur' your line compared to mine,just looked sloppy like butter,
you not only suk at writin your OWN rhymes....but u suck at copying others!!

Ima have to give you about a 67/100. Due to the flaws that I pointed out up above.

Sorry if ya dont like it, and werd up if you do. Im just tryna help yall close this shit like I said. So in my opinion Nick got this, but its up to the final polls. GL boys.

V/Fletch............................................

King Solo 11-08-05 12:58 AM

werd. a vote. appreciate it. :thumbup: 1-0 uppin......

noname 11-08-05 09:09 AM

uppin.............................................

King Solo 11-09-05 11:34 AM

uppin............................................. .

noname 11-09-05 07:21 PM

uppin.............................................

King Solo 11-10-05 06:37 AM

uppin and shit....................................

noname 11-10-05 03:06 PM

uppin.............................................

noname 11-10-05 10:22 PM

uppin.............................................

¤ÐÅž¤ 11-11-05 01:56 AM

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher
 
just checking the votes, not voting in this..lol...
it was a good battle...from both...props....

King Solo 11-11-05 03:23 AM

Damn fuckers won't vote. How is shit supposed to get closed around here ??

noname 11-11-05 12:35 PM

uppin this shit...................................

noname 11-12-05 12:17 AM

uppin.............................................

King Solo 11-12-05 05:23 AM

upping to the top of the page.........................


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