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mizz fyre 11-09-05 01:54 PM

Voted For: E.C

Tie-D: Opener was not good....verse lacked any real good punches and personals....average.....not enough to take the win.....finisher was o.k.....

E.C: nice verse.....opener was o.k...play on name was unoriginal but still effective....good punches....could have come with a harder finisher....

overall a weak battle.....E.C you came good with most of you're verse but i think you fell off at the end....Tie-D you had an o.k verse but you lacked in punches and the opener wasn't good....therefore E.C gets my vote

Gotti Nuffguns 11-09-05 02:09 PM

Voted For: E.C

LOL . at this

Vote - EC

Punches - EC
Multies - None
Nameplay - EC
Metas - EC
Structure - EC

ONE SIDED

EC - better punches n jabs n shit like that while Tie-D seemed he had no arms.

E.C 11-10-05 04:21 AM

uppin for the last vote............................

E.C 11-10-05 03:09 PM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Call_it_Murder01 11-10-05 05:10 PM

This was feedback posted for Tie-D
 
E.C-

is he beating me? with lines like his, i highley doubt he's mighty
coz your structure's fucked, so stay on point...
...n keep ya verses Tie-D,
^^^^Alright beginning, structure was strange

i'll write it quicker than ever for this, tie-d's known for stopping crews,
not coz he's dope... but becuz no crew wants to be rocking you,*
^^^^^Nice wordplay in second line..decent punch

ill leave you frailed bitch... slice ya neck, so you can be bloody rough,
i'd ask you to join the legends, but i know your knot good enough,
^^^^Lines were long, decent punch in second line

your as boring as ya profile man, now.. i'm stripping him bare,
coz ill Tie-D to a rope...
...and then kick away the chair,
^^^^weird structure, nice personal in first line, decent punch in second line

you want respect on this site? u need some skill to lift off shit,
coz if you keep droppin wack shit, ya gonna get kicked off it,
^^^^decent wording, okay punch in second line

overall-Structure was weird, punches coulda been more effective

Tie-D
This kid’s seat at school is by the wall for playing the fool
His crew insist their leaders not a toy
………………………….. playing like that’s just cruel
^^^^Weird structure, long line..didnt get punch

Now iv spat on it, I can go into a wet hole
EC knows all about that
………………..oh yeah, cos he “gets told”
^^^^Weird structure, punch was okay

Ya audios stink so bad, I wish I never heard you
Sounded like a dying giraffe wiv a bad case of bird flu.
^^^^^Probably nicest punch, but didnt make sense..a giraffe getting bird flu?

Rite you dumb fuck the funs up you’ve come un-stuck
To sum up.
......................you’ll only ever come up in a bum-fuck
^^^^^Weird structure, played out gay line, okay punch

overall-Need to work on originality, punches and wording basically

vote-E.C because his punches, wording and originality was a little stronger but not by much, nice try fellas and props..
~1~


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