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This was feedback posted for Daubs
I don't plan on voting but that was off the hook, Daubs. :D
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Voted For: Daubs
Winter battle? nope, maybe you can fool RV, but me I know season, while im keyin my punches... ...you th' autumn at least a week ago Met M.Jackson and loved it, said you never shaken a better hand cause your punches relate to his theme park...G they neverland He struggles to keep his girl satisfied, his sex lifes a doubt cause this bitch used all the balls he got in calling me out Your face is spotted,yellow and huge...kinda like ya mouth is so he's quick to clearasil... ...and i dont mean robbin houses You can beat a lotta people, maybe africa two, but nothin more So il show you ajar of talent...then kick you through the door v. nothing Geeze GK you need to elevate man. That old early 04 style is gone man.. you need to get some witty punches and work on wordplay...this is the second recent battle I read of yours that you didnt even throw punches in. Daubs my hats off to you bro. You've elevated so much, mad props. You def came wayyyyy better in this and got the win easily.. good shit Hit up this link, its mad slept on.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211555 |
Voted For: GKillaz05
Gkilla came with a nice verse.. nothing "amazing" but it did the trick.. structure made for a good flow, and you had lots of personals. Daubs, your structure was all over the place so it made it kinda hard to catch the flow, you had some decent punches too i just felt that Gkilla came that much harder overall - GKilla |
pinkslip battle me instead of hate voting .
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why is that a hate vote Daubs, you and him dont get along?..
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Voted For: Daubs
Winter battle? nope, maybe you can fool RV, but me I know season, while im keyin my punches... ...you th' autumn at least a week ago He struggles to keep his girl satisfied, his sex lifes a doubt cause this bitch used all the balls he got in calling me out You can beat a lotta people, maybe africa two, but nothin more So il show you ajar of talent...then kick you through the door See fag, i told you had a chance...but it was just a metaphor but still you picked up the pencil... ...and tried to draw the smallest straw vs ughh, nothing i read his whole verse, and there was nothing at all...almost on a couple of lines, but no punches, every personal was fake....really need to elevate and get a better grip on concepts, to actually DISS the other person v/daubs, nice battle....rtf on one of my battles somewhere :) |
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UPPIN' ... Good Win Daubs, No Hate.
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safe man.
Wanna get this closed or let it be voted out. |
close it. S'all Good - Dont be lookin' very good for me.
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